"M-mom, I'm sorry... P-please, have mercy on your daughter!!" She cried, terrified. Rainbow Dash glared down with pure anger, as if Rainbow Speed had kil.led a friend. "....You... are NOT my daughter." Rainbow Speed looked terrified as her mother screamed a last order: "SEND THIS IMPOSTOR TO THE MACHINE!!" Rainbow Speed couldn't take it. She screamed in fear, hugging her mom. "NO!! MOM, DON'T SEND ME THERE, PLEASE!!! I DON'T WANNA DIE!!!" But it was all in vain, for the scientists began dragging her away. "NOOOO!!!!" [c]

Rainbow Speed was suddenly pushed onto a table, as they strapped her in. As the table went up, Rainbow Speed realized what her true talent was: DEATH. a skull replaced the rainbow that faded near the end. As the needle went into her body and drained her color, she did not scream, but laugh evily. As all the color was leaving, she broke free, which left a bit of color in her mane, wings, and tail, as well as the bottom of her hooves. She landed lightly, glaring at her mortified mother. "Now... MY TURN, BI.TCH." [c]

Rainbow Dash looked terrified, begging to step back. Rainbow Speed laughed, walking closer. "N-n-now listen, R-r-rainbow Speed-" Rainbow speed stomped down hard. "NEVER CALL ME THAT AGAIN! My name is Nega- Death Negative!!" Nega laughed evily, lunging at Rainbow Dash. She stomped on her convulsing and scre.aming body, relishing the sound of bones breaking. "PUT THIS BI.TCH IN THE MACHINE AND DRAIN HER COLOR. BUT LEAVE HER FOR ME TO KI.LL!!!" Nega bellowed. [c]

The needle quickly sunk into Rainbow Dash, as she screamed. Once her color was gone, they unstrapped her, and she fell with a thud. Nega licked the sharp edge of a butcher's knife, then rest it on Rainbow Dash's neck. "Au revoir... MOTHER." She slowly moved the blade back and forth, relishing her former mother's screams of agony, and licked the blood that spurted out. This continued until Rainbow Dash's head was clean off. Rainbow Dash uttered one last bloodcurdling scream. Nega laughed maniacally, knowing SHE owned the Rainbow factory now. She could ki.ll whoever she liked... But she wanted to ki.ll her mother's friends. [c] [almost done.]

Nega spoke. "SCIENTISTS! GET ME RARITY, APPLEJACK, TWILIGHT, PINKIE PIE, FLUTTERSHY, AND SPIKE!" She laughed maniacally, chopping her former mother's body to bits. "Oh, and feed this to our Diamond Dogs..." [End of chapter one. Who do YOU want Nega to destr.oy next?]

Thanks. So, who do you wanna see Nega ki.ll next?

Okk. ...Man, it felt SO good to get this out.

Me, I draw horrifying things, and describe them with lots of gore. I would LOVE to ki.ll my mom this way.... Then she'd never terrify me again... ewe

Sorry, I feel really evil today. ewe

I think Spike first (I'm horrible D':) then the rest will wonder where he is. Then Twilight, Pinkie, AJ, Rarity and finally Fluttershy :P

If you leave your FC in my gallery I can send you 'pics' on swapnote

You gonna K.ill me, too? D:

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Uh, what I meant by next story is after Aku is defeated..but you seem to really want to be in this one. So tell you what, Ecko will mention Unari when he re-appears, but she son't make an actual appearence til after Aku is defeated. Sorry for the wait and mis-communication..

um ya i need to tell you something. it hurt cutie pie that you said she NEEDED a template so maybe you should go clear things up... or ELSE!

do i know you? S:/

me?

can you attempt to kil me plz! plz! plz! with rainbow dash's wing on top!

disturbing my after is not that evil... O-O

whoa this is like creepypasta...but for MLP

i say rarity

not pinkie pie she's as ruthless as her. she should ki,ll applejack. >:D

dare i say THE CMC? im evil....

Err, not sure...I know a few Ambers I think...

twilight

It's good, but I didn't like the cursing. But I did like the blood.

dang u pplz are bloody.