Artificial Feelings by RanchRobin
Okay, I remade him, looks soooo much better.
Although... I need help with his little poem thing.
The only thing he likes to do is lay and write poetic complaints about his life in the journal he stole from his captors.
So I need something to rhyme with Captors and he sentence needs to involve getting revenge. Any ideas? Please tell me in comments if you have a decent rhyme for it.
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30 Aug, 2016, 4:39 am
hmm idk i'm bad at rhyming
30 Aug, 2016, 6:30 am
Time may pass but i withstand
unbroken by my captors hand
i hold against the roar of man
(Adaption)
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Time may pass but we withstand
unbroken by our masters hand
we hold against the roar of man
(Original)
-Taken from line 1 of "The Roar"
by Ram J.V.
30 Aug, 2016, 6:47 am
As for a portion on revenge hmmm...
ive paid the price ahundred fold
from nasence on ive held the mold,
ive found no peace in freedom,
even know i feel the hold,
Ive the right to seek desention (it he she they man) shall govern me...no more
or something like that, pictures looking swell btw.
30 Aug, 2016, 7:55 am
Re: swell.
Glad i could be of service
ps: i pulled down -Drifting- edited it and reuploaded it
there was some minor stuff that was bothering me an I HAD TO FIX IT
im teling you this because your comment was a casualty in the process and i guess dissapearing comments would bother me so just a heads up,
anyways i honestly cant wait to see your finished piece,
keep it up.