happy fourth of july! by SpiralingUpward

happy fourth! have a picture i actually took time on lol. i hope everyone has a wonderful day and enjoy all the fireworks! these are my new ocs Bruton and im still looking for a name for the lizard, and taking suggestions!
:) anyway have a wonderful day! ill have their refs up soon.
#yoocs #fourthofjuly #fireworks #independenceday #Bruton

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
04 Jul, 2016, 12:11 pm
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The_Adjudicator

04 Jul, 2016, 4:23 pm

Happy Flashy Boom day :D

ShadowPikaboo

06 Jul, 2016, 3:11 pm

Re: no problem yoshi! We can do are evil schemes next time! So Malice made his appearance I'm excited to see Andrius turn next. >:)

ShadowPikaboo

06 Jul, 2016, 5:43 pm

RP: that would be cool! :D so next time are you going to have one of the Basset Trunkfish report back to Andrius?

ShadowPikaboo

06 Jul, 2016, 6:36 pm

RP: oooo very exciting! X3 I bet Mal will find it most entertaining >:)

ShadowPikaboo

06 Jul, 2016, 9:36 pm

Re: haha yay I has hoping for that! Mal will play good cop and andrius will be bad cop, XD Mal will try and gain the group Trust making them thinking Andrius is the boss and then Mal will stab them in the back >:)

ShadowPikaboo

06 Jul, 2016, 9:51 pm

Re: ooo Mal will just watch the entertainment >:) and speak to andrius after the Revenge. And yaeh Hiiro probably will to! XD though I'm going to really try and get the group inside the temple so they can get their first key Xp oh and they will be tested

ShadowPikaboo

06 Jul, 2016, 10:09 pm

Re: oooo so excited! XD and I'm hoping to not be as bogged down with work this time! * cross fingers*

BloodHybrid

07 Jul, 2016, 7:49 am

Seeing yours and Pika comments, Hiiro will definitely want revenge >:D
Also I enjoyed the RP fight, it was fun. But I felt you overdid it at times, like slashing at Hiiro muzzle and then biting his tail, it didn't give me an opportunity for Hiiro to defend himself.
I feel it could have gone a bit better, maybe I am just use to RP fighting with Fading but I can do an example if you want, so that way it makes the fight more even/fair.

BloodHybrid

07 Jul, 2016, 7:13 pm

Re: Hahaha that's fine, I understand getting carried away, I can too sometimes! I was fine with Bones biting and scratching Hiiro's neck and back when he was stuck, because well, he couldn't move. But after that I suggest doing something like:

-Bones rushed forward, jumping up, he slashed at the dragon's muzzle. Landing back on the ground, Bones ran around Hiiro attempting to bite his tail.

-Hiiro roared in pain at his muzzle being slashed, he just barely noticed Bones run around him, Hiiro jerked his tail away at the last moment before Bones could bite it. Whipping it around, he cracked it against Bones muzzle.

See how the second part gives me time for Hiiro to move/defend himself or attack back

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