my possession, chapter1 by ruby8901
so here is the first chapter of mt possession
beep beep beep bee- click yawn just another boring day at leadt it maybe boring but who knows. I get up and put on my slippers and walk to my mirror. "sigh" when will i have a choice of my own I think to myself as I walk away from the mirror. I desiced to put my nice shirt that has one seleve missing and put on my grey shorts. I grab my brush and start to brush my messy hair down. I look at myself in the mirror one last time cont. #mypossession #ruby
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15 May, 2016, 11:35 pm
I head out of my room and I noticed that my eyes were flickering from my normal eye color red to gold. Oh no I thought to myself
" is my necklace running out of power?"
" am i just losing my powers?"
" this can't be good " i said but I noticed that my eyes stopped flickering then my head starts to spin and my eyes glow a super bright gold and my nails start to grow long
" no I still have my necklace on this can be happing why is this happing I just want to be free of this... to have my own choice" then I start to forget where i am and how the people i know and love. i look in the mirror one last time and i just say thats better with an angry tone i start to walk toward the door when i start to hear her voice in my head
" ruby....ruby you will go and start to harm .... you will harm the people you love"
"NO NO STOP!!! ...... i have a choice.. i can be free!"
"ruby you dont have a choice this is how you are.... you are made to harm.... made to hurt people... ones you love ....(cont.)
15 May, 2016, 11:46 pm
(cont.)
who you are"
"NO no i'm not made to hurt anyone .... i ...won't" ruby said say while trying to fight back she hits her dresser and falls to her knees while she is crying
"I WON'T HURT.... I WON'T HURT ANYONE!!"
" ruby you maynot want to hurt anyone but your hurting yourself" ruby has her hands on her face she takes her hands of her face and she notices that there is blood on her hands she gets up and looks in the mirror and notices that she stuck her nails in her cheeks and there is blood running down her cheeks onto her shirt.
so how do u like it so far guys?
16 May, 2016, 2:13 am
I'm curious on what will happen next. I'mma follow this story.
16 May, 2016, 3:34 pm
Sorry, but this is really taking the mick now. That is the story I wrote about Aqui and you know it. You literally just put it into your own words, took a few parts out and added one or two different lines into it. Please please stop copying me and just be original! Im sure you can think of good ideas by yourself, just believe in yourself.
And although you took one stripe off of Ruby's ears she still looks like the spit of Aqui with grey fur rather than pink and a red diamond necklace rather than a gold one. Her hair colour, eye colour, hair cut and necklace (apart from the colour) are the SAME. You can make up your own, just mix it up a little. Im not saying completely change your character but just so they dont look like almost twins. :/
Does anyone agree? ;~;' Just be original! You can do it!