Well, you are getting better on bodies, but you shouldn't show too much cleavage in my opinion. and you might want to practice and perfect how you draw faces, tracing helped me in my earlier stages of drawing actually. as long as you give credit to the original, it'll be okay.
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28 Apr, 2016, 11:43 pm
It's sad, but I love the lighting *o*
28 Apr, 2016, 11:58 pm
thanks.
-Joi
29 Apr, 2016, 12:00 am
sure ^^
and you have been getting better.
and thanks! it is supposed to be fire.
-Super
29 Apr, 2016, 12:04 am
The lighting is so beatiful!
29 Apr, 2016, 12:05 am
thanks
-Grey
29 Apr, 2016, 12:12 am
well, do you want a critic or what i like about the peices?
i'll use #Reniade Kioku's son.
29 Apr, 2016, 12:13 am
Reniade: *is eating in a tree outside, just having a apple*
29 Apr, 2016, 12:41 am
Reniade: ..... *bored*
(yes what?)
29 Apr, 2016, 12:55 am
Reniade: *sighs* *mutters* "humans..."
29 Apr, 2016, 12:58 am
Well, you are getting better on bodies, but you shouldn't show too much cleavage in my opinion. and you might want to practice and perfect how you draw faces, tracing helped me in my earlier stages of drawing actually. as long as you give credit to the original, it'll be okay.
29 Apr, 2016, 12:59 am
Reniade: *doesn't feel comfortible around lots of food, or larger women.* *staring blankly at the horizon*
29 Apr, 2016, 1:27 am
Reniade: *is eating a apple*
(np)
29 Apr, 2016, 1:34 am
Reniade: no thanks...
29 Apr, 2016, 1:38 am
Reniade: i'm fine. *moves his wings away from her*
29 Apr, 2016, 1:54 am
Reniade: why?... what's in it for you?...
29 Apr, 2016, 2:01 am
Reniade: do you think i'm homeless or something?
29 Apr, 2016, 2:07 am
Reniade: honestly, yes.
29 Apr, 2016, 2:16 am
Reniade: *yanks his hand back* hey! you don't just make someone touch their fear!
29 Apr, 2016, 2:23 am
Reniade: no. *jumps down out of the tree*
29 Apr, 2016, 2:26 am
Reniade: oof!!
29 Apr, 2016, 2:36 am
Reniade: i'm fine... why are you so determined to have me eat with you?...
29 Apr, 2016, 2:45 am
Reniade: i've lost people i care about, alright?... just leave me alone...
29 Apr, 2016, 2:54 am
Reniade: ! quit touching me...
29 Apr, 2016, 3:03 am
Reniade: i have a mom, i'm not homeless, and i don't need help from a clingy stranger! *he pulls out of her embrace and starts running*
29 Apr, 2016, 3:08 am
Reniade: !! *sweat drop* y-yeah?
29 Apr, 2016, 3:19 am
Reniade: then you know how easily she gets upset.
29 Apr, 2016, 3:29 am
Reniade: at least she didn't feed one of your friends to your sister.
29 Apr, 2016, 3:36 am
Reniade: she sort of is... pretty soon though.... uh... nevermind... can you let me go please?
29 Apr, 2016, 3:43 am
Reniade: if i don't go back, i can't save dad...
29 Apr, 2016, 3:49 am
Reniade: because... my family tends to deal with people by sometimes turning them into that...
29 Apr, 2016, 3:57 am
Reniade: just... don't be so blatent about your fat....
29 Apr, 2016, 4:02 am
Reniade: .... by sister doesn't even like to eat... she's not a problem.
29 Apr, 2016, 4:10 am
Reniade: ..... *just looking at the ground*
29 Apr, 2016, 4:15 am
Reniade: .........
29 Apr, 2016, 4:28 am
Reniade: !... don't kill my mother...
29 Apr, 2016, 4:31 am
Reniade: *really doesn't feel safe now* yeah she's harsh sometimes, but she doesn't need to be killed...
29 Apr, 2016, 4:35 am
Reniade: ......?
29 Apr, 2016, 4:38 am
(gtg to sleep)
29 Apr, 2016, 5:08 pm
Reniade: .....