I like the attention to detail, like with the leaves, berries, grass and water. The stance and position are well balanced, having branches on bith sides, but the bird and moon on the side opposite the bow. There's also a definate sense of direction: the bow, wing and crescent moon all point the same direction. As for anything to change/add, the only thing I can think of is 3D and/or more shading. Does that help?
On second thought, I don't think intense shading would work and 3D would only work,if you started drawing in 3D, but if I do think of any way to improve it, I'll let you know. I know you would like a critique, so I'm sorry if I wasn't helpful.
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26 Jul, 2012, 7:14 pm
Pretty cool! :)
26 Jul, 2012, 7:24 pm
Thank u very much for the feedback!:D
26 Jul, 2012, 9:43 pm
awesome
29 Jul, 2012, 3:19 am
now this is some good stuf
29 Jul, 2012, 4:34 am
Thanks!
15 Aug, 2012, 3:49 am
thats really good!
02 Oct, 2012, 3:48 am
I like the attention to detail, like with the leaves, berries, grass and water. The stance and position are well balanced, having branches on bith sides, but the bird and moon on the side opposite the bow. There's also a definate sense of direction: the bow, wing and crescent moon all point the same direction. As for anything to change/add, the only thing I can think of is 3D and/or more shading. Does that help?
04 Oct, 2012, 5:22 am
On second thought, I don't think intense shading would work and 3D would only work,if you started drawing in 3D, but if I do think of any way to improve it, I'll let you know. I know you would like a critique, so I'm sorry if I wasn't helpful.