Wow! This looks professinal! Amazing work! I have nothing to critque!

I really like the right panels, they're very clean and the characters have nice expressions. The speach bubbles are also very easy to follow so far.

In the left panel I feel like the elf is a little hard to read? Like I can tell there's a guy there but since we haven't seen him yet it's kinda hard to tell what he's doing? Probably after we see a couple more pics of him it'll be easier to look back and tell better though.
Also for the left panel I'm having a hard time deciding if it's outside or inside just by looking at it.

But over all this page looks really good and the confusing things will more than likely be cleared up by seeing the next few pages. :)

(sorry, I'm just trying to give as much constructive criticism as I can; but honestly your work is great and doesn't really need it c:)

re: thanks ;u; ive been waiting so long for a comment like that

AHHHHHH
THIS IS TOO AMAZING
YOUR SKILLS AND ART
THIS IS SO AMAZING
EVERYTHING IS PERFECT
HOW DO YOU DO IT
BLOW US AWAY WITH EVERY SINGLE PAGE YOU MAKE AND I WON'T LIVE TO READ THE END
ITS SO BOOTIFULLLLLLLLLLHSHIEBDHJSGGSKGNGLD

oh my hggssaaa this is beautiful ;0;

re: oh my goodness thank you so much! Q0Q your comment just made my day :'D
just wowowo thank you buddy ol pal o friend of mine

re: thanks ;u; and no im just a senior in a normal highschool xD but i am in art class.

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Wow, haha, thanks so much! I'm really glad you like my gallery and think my stuff's good! I feel like our art is similar in some ways so it means a lot that you're interest in mine too.

And I'm super glad my critique helped!! I can't wait to see the next page. You're style is so clean an nice to look at. :)

re: thank you! and i'm so glad :''D

re: honestly your comments inspire me to carry on making art, especially since they're your comments, and your art is so stunning! Your support means so much i cannot thank you enough >w<