Artifact RP Entry by FadingGlory

#KJArtifactRef
Update: Removing his spider eyes and changing his age to 16.

All info will be in the comments! (Add. info farther down - forgot about it for a while xP) CRUD I MEANT BELLTOW, NOT BELLTOLL!!

#spider #wolfspider #centaur #coolnewhandwriting #FGRaven
I am a really big perfectionist to have actually spent an entire 11 hours on the sketch alone... what is my problem?

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
21 Feb, 2016, 11:23 pm
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FadingGlory

21 Feb, 2016, 11:31 pm

Personality: cool, mature, apathetic, unsocial, intelligent, quick learner, honest, sticks to promises, cautious, slow to trust, loner, rarely speaks unless spoken to

Strengths: speedy and agile, high stamina levels, can leap far distances, legs act as a suspension for falls, legs powerful and sturdy, spider eyes see in the dark, good survival instincts, experienced with fighting wild beasts/monsters, exoskeleton acts as armor, legs grow back if severed, good with a spear

Weaknesses: becomes extremely tired and unfocused when exposed to the cold, large target, unable to morph into a smaller/less noticeable form, spider eyes sensitive to sudden light exposure, cannot climb steep surfaces, legs can be severed at the joints, slightly short-tempered, sensitive to insults, coldness towards others leaves with no allies

FadingGlory

21 Feb, 2016, 11:38 pm

Backstory (this might be long): Raven was born in the outskirts of Belltoll, Ethos. Although he does not remember the exact date of his birth, he is estimated to have been born eight or nine years before the war. His father left him and his mother while he was very young, so he cannot recall whether he was a spider centaur like himself or not, but he never had the courage to ask. Raven spent most of his time alone or with his mother because the other children in Belltoll avoided him for his intimidating body and arachnidian antics. Even if he was not such a rare and unfortunate species, Raven would never have been able to fit in: he always saw things on a serious level and never took interest in games and play. (cont.)

FadingGlory

21 Feb, 2016, 11:46 pm

(cont.) When the war first began, Ethonian troops came to Belltoll seeking provisions, but they found interest in Raven's strange capabilities and attempted to recruit him for the war. Afraid for her son's safety, Raven's mother took him and fled to the Wastelands where they wandered aimlessly. For a while, they managed to survive off of the creatures that they could catch and sources of water that they miraculously discovered, but the quickly-expanding warfield chased them farther west.
One fateful day, during their journey, a viscous monster more terrifying than they had ever encountered blocked their path and attacked them. In his attempts to protect his mother, Raven was badly wounded, so he could only watch as his mother was killed before his very eyes. Raven managed to escape the monster, but not without a permanent scar on his right shoulder to constantly remind him of that day.
Afterwards, he vowed to track down every harm-inflicting wild beast and slaughter them all. (cont.)

FadingGlory

21 Feb, 2016, 11:54 pm

(cont.) Over the next five years, Raven hunted down monster after monster while also mastering survival in the Wastelands. Often, he would run into a nearby town, where he would use rare objects that he plundered from beasts to trade for provisions, or slayed the creatures that terrorized them for pay, but he never stayed in any town for long. Very often, Raven faced close encounters with the rage of war as it moved to the Wastelands, and as it gradually grew unavoidable, he was forced to leave. With no other place in Ethos to flee to, Raven came to Escade and boarded a ship destined for Vale.

Antifreeze

21 Feb, 2016, 11:56 pm

Nice backstory! Also, that time spent!
I can't wait for this RP, especially with the character variety.

FadingGlory

22 Feb, 2016, 12:04 am

Roleplay sample: Raven sighed from where he huddled on the deck of the docked ship. The noonday sun beat down upon the city of Escade as the vessel rocked on the Median Sea, and he pulled his cloak tighter around himself to block out the rays.
After having bartered with the ship captain for a ride to Vale in exchange for the rare tusk of a demon-bear, Raven had waited patiently in a quiet corner while awakening old memories from his past.
"Mother, why are people afraid of me?" Raven had asked as he watched Ethonian citizens walk by, frowning when they detoured around him or avoided eye contact.
"They aren't afraid of you," his mother had assured him. "They just think you're a bit different."
Raven gazed up into his mother's eyes. "Mother, are you afraid of me?"
Her expression passionate, she knelt down before him and took him by the shoulders. "Of course not, my son. I love you very much."
"Why do you love me?" Raven asked wistfully. "Is it just because I'm your son?" (cont.)

FadingGlory

22 Feb, 2016, 12:09 am

(cont.) His mother caressed her fingers through his hair. "Raven, I have always loved you. Not because I birthed you, and not because you are your father's son, but because you are Raven Stryker." She embraced him in a tight hug. "It doesn't matter what you look like or what you are - I will always love you, because you are you."
Ever since that moment, Raven had determined to always protect his mother and return the love that she had so freely given. But he had failed when he let her die.
'Never again will I befriend another,' he vowed to himself as he leaned against the gunwale of the ship. Raven couldn't bear to lose another loved one.

FadingGlory

22 Feb, 2016, 12:12 am

Sorry that sample was so long! I tried to include everything that might appear in a roleplay (setting descriptions, conversation, thoughts, flashbacks, etc.), but I promise that my comments won't be as long during the RP!
But technically, the sample above is a collection of multiple comments, since it there is conversation between two seperate characters...

KaileyCrafter

22 Feb, 2016, 12:21 am

heh already got a man-horse so wynaut a man-spider -w-
cool race idea

Radiant Raindragon

22 Feb, 2016, 12:25 am

That's not something I'd like to meet in a dark forest... XD

But woah, you always put so much time into everything, even ref sheets! I don't think I'll be joining this RP, mainly because I won't be available the first Saturday it's on. But I'll be sure to watch. X)

Whale Fanatic

22 Feb, 2016, 12:32 am

Aah! A wolf spider centaur! What a cool idea! cx I'm glad you put so much time into it. I like his backstory. If he and Fiacail were to hit it off as buds somehow, it'd likely be due to the similarities of their pasts (their mothers were killed, they both have a memento to remember them by, and neither of them have knowledge as to where their fathers are). cx

Rokkudaun

22 Feb, 2016, 12:41 am

WOOOOOOOOOW this looks sooooooooo nice :O

Whale Fanatic

22 Feb, 2016, 12:43 am

Re: *announcer's voice This Saturday at ten/eleven am Pacific, eight/nine am Central, nine/teb am Eastern, et cetera, et cetera! XD I don't even...

Whale Fanatic

22 Feb, 2016, 12:44 am

*ten

...Haha... teb...

Wind Swirl

22 Feb, 2016, 12:50 am

Oh my, that´s such a great and unique character!
I love Wolf Spiders, they seem swift and powerful hunters and look cool on top of that. I really like this concept, it reminds me of tolkien´s original concept of Shelob. Great work!

FadingGlory

22 Feb, 2016, 12:55 am

*** Oops, almlst forgot these! ***
Add. Info:
- Wears cloak in public to hide legs
- Blood is purple because it is a mix of haemoglobin blood (human blood; red) and haemocyanin blood (spider blood; dull blue) in order to support both parts of his body.
- Not only is the cold a weakness to him, but he also spent the majority of his lifetime in the desert, thus he naturally hates the cold.
- Meat and water are his only requirements to stay alive and healthy. He can eat bread and vegetation, but they are not necessary.
- His spider eyes can see in the dark but cannot see well in the daytime. Also, once they have adjusted to the darkness, they are highly sensitive to sudden light and could be used against him.
- Will only use knife for combat when extremely necessary: otherwise it is used for cutting materials and the sort.
- Asking if Raven eats insects is asking for a death wish.

Antifreeze

22 Feb, 2016, 2:17 am

He's so neato

Rosey_tint

22 Feb, 2016, 4:01 am

Good Grod!! This is such a lovely character!!! I would make a spider centaur too but... Spiders still scare the hell outta me

WolfInTheRain

22 Feb, 2016, 5:03 am

Very cool. Reminded me of driders from D and D

KMCStudios

22 Feb, 2016, 5:10 am

DAAANG, THIS IS SUCH AN EPIC IDEA. I love chimeras like this; taking two or more completely different species and mixing them up. Epic! ;w;

Also, re: it's okay, there were a few trades I never got to, but I'm not gonna worry about it. XD And it's okay about the trade thing, I still gotta draw out some ideas, but I have a lot of trouble designing dragons. xD;; Plus, I may have another project distracting me that I'm hoping to start soon... >u>

WinchesterFox

22 Feb, 2016, 7:11 am

HAGQ
NOPE

BloodHybrid

22 Feb, 2016, 9:57 am

OH wow he's so cool and what an amazing backstory!

KMCStudios

22 Feb, 2016, 7:36 pm

RE: YEP, this is it! 8D It's not too big of a thing, the trial chapter is only like 15 pages long, but yep. cB And thank you so much for the advice! It helps so much. ;w; I've been having a really hard time thinking about if this story makes sense objectively. xD Since the story involves 2-3 characters who were born and raised in the world, I'm probably gonna have to include that extra page. XD

SpiralingUpward

22 Feb, 2016, 10:10 pm

WOW.... WOW this is excellent! very good! i loved the backstory! this was way better than mine! i love it! (even though im not a big fan of spiders)

SpiralingUpward

22 Feb, 2016, 10:13 pm

re: thanks! i tryed to make it as close to a dagger
its ok lol ok so 1-2 pm got it!

Jaslet

22 Feb, 2016, 10:32 pm

Very impressive! I see you put a lot of thought into this!

HolyPandaz

23 Feb, 2016, 12:55 am

Re: Thanks for the comments.. If you watch the playback to the pinkie pie picture you'll see what I mean by 'blood or tears'

LillyLightstar

23 Feb, 2016, 1:01 am

Re: Thanks for the comment on Fyur's pic! :D

And... this is easily one of the most creative OCs I've seen! I always have some trouble drawing ref sheets, I almost always end up cutting off a dragon's tail or wings, or I never leave enough space for anything else XD
Eh... while this is good and creative and all... I'm like... the most arachnaphobic girl in the world, so... I'm gonna go to Antartica now 'XD

LillyLightstar

23 Feb, 2016, 3:46 am

Re: Ehh... it's alright :p I'm sure if Raven was nice enough in person, I could get along with him, at least XD I admire your creativity, though ^-^

KeeperofThorns

23 Feb, 2016, 4:46 am

so coool!!!

SpiralingUpward

23 Feb, 2016, 11:41 am

re: XD yeah he is a big bad wolf lol, and your very welcome! same with me: im ok with spiders but if they near me or on me ha.... im gonna be like rolling in the grass and hiting myself with a stick lol

crabmonster

23 Feb, 2016, 3:49 pm

its strange and amazing frighting and cool . you got style.

LillyLightstar

23 Feb, 2016, 8:10 pm

Re: Heh, it's alright :3 Can't wait to see whatever masterpiece you'll come up with next, though! :D

SpiralingUpward

23 Feb, 2016, 9:32 pm

re: yeah i hate it when that happens! its like i see you now where did you go? 4 months go by and you dont see a sign of it...

The_Adjudicator

24 Feb, 2016, 11:03 am

Nope, you can't use him in your role plays. He's coming home with me, and we're gonna become best friends whether he likes it or not. *u*

Echokit

24 Feb, 2016, 1:27 pm

Hhhh I wanted to comment on this but I forgot X'D I'm sorry!
This is so amazing! Spiders really aren't my thing, however he looks gorgeous - like he's from a real fantasy movie x3 Also, you did such a great job on the perspective of the legs!

Echokit

24 Feb, 2016, 1:32 pm

Re: Thank you so much! :3

Blue_Eyes

25 Feb, 2016, 1:56 am

Thank god im pretty much over my phobia of spiders....still have the creepy crollies thought XD

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