Darkshines Chapter 2 by Aqualia the Fox

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Aqui's p.o.v:

"Phew!" I sigh, falling back against the door. I lied my way to getting Cosmo out; I told her I was grieving over my dad again, that i'd gotten another one of those nightmares where he gets brutally stabbed before my eyes by a mad, glitchy version of the witch that cast my spell. It was a terrible lie but it did the job, for now...

I subconsciously scratch my cheek to feel a wet powdery substance. Make up. (more in comments)

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
20 Feb, 2016, 10:00 pm
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Aqualia the Fox

20 Feb, 2016, 10:06 pm

Sighing, I decide I better take it off and redo it. So I stumble unwillingly towards my dressing table and grab a make up wipe.

After 15 minutes I see a fox weakly smiling at me in the mirror with a fixed up face. "There, all done!" I sigh. I'm not the type of person to rely on make up to keep me looking decent, but I do enjoy experimenting sometimes. I dislike the people who plaster themselves with foundation and all sorts of things. I can't do that to my beautiful fur!

I quicky run a brush through my thick blue hair and straighten out my dress that is easily made askew by the gem-engraved metal being fairly heavy... Lets just say I wear a strong bra for a reason...

Aqualia the Fox

20 Feb, 2016, 10:07 pm

Pushing that thought aside, I catch a glimpse of something catching the sunlight. I turn around to see my bedside table, and on top of it my crown. It reminds me of my original planet... my mum... my family...

My home.

I sit on my bed and run a finger through the dust that has collected on it over time. The sunlight streaming through the window catches the silver it's made from more than before, almost blinding me. I quickly rotate it to see an undisturbed layer of dust on the other side. Sighing, I get up again not breaking eye contact with my only reminder of my importance.

"I miss my mum... I miss home... I miss my old life..." Holding in new tears threatening to ruin my new layer of make up. I'm NOT going through THAT again! I mentally scold myself and turn away from my memories. But the thought of royalty back home lingers. Being the fox princess had not many responsibilities at all. That made my move to another planet quite convenient. The only reason I moved of course was that horrible witch. At least I have Tails here...

Aqualia the Fox

20 Feb, 2016, 10:07 pm

My thoughts are abruptly cut short when a chill as cold as ice shot through my heart. I fall to the floor on my hands and knees as freezing pain spreads from my chest to every limb in my body. I try not to scream as I know what's going on and it will make the situation much worse. I don't want anybody hurt. Why did I have to think about my royalty?! Agggggggghhhhhhhh! I scream internally.

My eyes widen as every bone in my body starts to ache with the cold. I dig my claws into the carpet as pain overwhelms me. Shuddering at the feeling of my body altering the way it does every time I try not to make any noise that would alarm Tails and Cosmo downstairs. My teeth grow sharp fangs, my hair and tail begin to look unkept and my eyes slowly turn from my grieving blue to an evil glowing red. My clothes shine bright, blinding me as it fills the entire room as my dress alters to the evil form. I know what's next...

Aqualia the Fox

20 Feb, 2016, 10:07 pm

My mind and thoughts begin to slip away as they're replaced with my evil self under the curse. I try to fight it but I can't stop my memories leaving my brain one by one in a rapid stream. Trying to mentally hold my basic knowledge together is mildly effective until I suddenly lose control completely and forget where I am or who I am.

And then the pain stops. But i'm gone...

Aqualia the Fox

20 Feb, 2016, 10:07 pm

Evil Aqui's p.o.v:

I emerge in my innocent body, a host, a curse. Smirking at the thought of what I can do with my powers mixed with my innocent form's aqua powers I get up off of the floor and walk over to the full-view mirror next to the wardrobe. I look at myself up and down and smirk again at how hot I am in my ripped crimson dress which is shorter than it should be. 'Oh, stop' I think to myself as I give myself one last look of satisfaction before turning away and chuckling in a voice dripping with evil.

"Time for things to get ugly..." I snarl as I walk out of Aqui's bedroom and make for the stairs.

Aqualia the Fox

20 Feb, 2016, 10:08 pm

(Rest of story is in internet comments!)

Siobhanatron

21 Feb, 2016, 12:35 am

SWEEEEEEET!!!

Cinos

21 Feb, 2016, 3:37 am

I feel like there should have been more of a transition between her thinking about her home and her changing into her evil form. The way it's written makes it seem like it's connected. Other than that, pretty good so far! I like your style :)

JayAndVolts

21 Feb, 2016, 3:51 am

Oh my! Sounds serious.

Aqualia the Fox

21 Feb, 2016, 11:24 am

Ty all! And @Cinos I thought I should've added more detail :/ But the reason she transformed was because she was thinking about her royal duties... Do you think I should've made that clearer? OnO' Ty for the advice btw x3

Artsy Flash

21 Feb, 2016, 5:37 pm

Quick question, are there going to be possible cameos in this story? Just curious...

Cinos

21 Feb, 2016, 7:21 pm

I think that's a really dumb idea. That's like me turning into a demon every time I think about my house. I think you should make it more like every time she puts her crown on or something more specific. She should be turning evil every day if this is the case.

Aqualia the Fox

21 Feb, 2016, 9:55 pm

^ Hmmmmm... possibly! ^u^

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