^ran outta space there xD

So, congratulations @Super Yoshi! I think yours was very good and had a comical sense that rooted to the Aqua's goal. You had full backgrounds and a sense of enviroment that made the comic feel live. The dialog was quiet clean, however I had to deduct a point because you had Giru say "possible" when I think you meant to say "possibly"... But you won anyway so congrats :D

Now, @Kikloaxer's was also funny and had an unexpected plot. In expression, Kik's face in the "first" panel seemed believable (which is good!). However, it took a second to read it because it read from the right panel, to the left, then down, which is common in manga but it doesn't note this in the desc so it took a second, thankfully it was only a matter between the first two panels so it's okay.

Also, inclusion of Fire Emblem, I like that. xD

Truth be told, I actually liked @Time Paladin's as a comic itself more than Super Yoshi's, however SY's won by score and so I decided @Time Paladin's was put in at second place.

The character expression was very good, and the inclusion of other Aqua members was a nice touch. The dialog was really, really clean, and I think it was the best written, but I had to deduct a point because some was a bit too small, and I know I can read it easily on my 3dsXL, but I do not know how it works for those with the 3ds or 2ds. I noted no errors or misspells, which is a commendment cuz there's a lot of dialog!

^except that it's Scorpomix, not Scorpiomix, that's the only error in your dialog.

Now, Scorpomix's comic was the last to enter, and it had good action in it. There was different backgrounds and it had a good plot to it, and it felt like an action comic, which was nice. Expression was good here, and the Plasma grunt looks terrified xD It was overall creative and had a good plot. Comedy was there too, so good job!

Congrats to Super Yoshi! ^-^ Yeah, I also felt the text was uneven in my comic. I've been out of practice when it comes to comics. ^-^" Honestly though, I really enjoyed making it, especially since it's my first contribution to Aqua Team. : )

Also, here's an update to the Crew Manifest and ranks #CrewManifest so please, check it out :b

@Time Paladin, I think your dialog was terrific! Better than mine xD But Colors!3d does have a very high resolution, so it's sad when the words don't come out so clean...

Thank you for entering though! And please check the tag, it involves you, too :b

(btw, you may keep the jacket, matey)

re: well at first I meant it but then I found the strength to draw a person so u dont have to do it

Yay! I'm official now! ^u^
I plan on doing a more official post soon with my full team. Thanks for letting me keep the jacket btw! XD

aw dang. Oh well. Congrats, @Super Yoshi!

Hey, congrats to the winners! I took a look at the tag for ones I had missed, and I had a good laugh at a few of them.

(Gah, I wish I'd joined. Curse you school!)

Congrats winners! And all of the honrable mentions!

My Favorite was probably Time Paladin's.

Alas, I have ran out of time to complete my entry... but hey, there's always next time I suppose.

I agree that all the entries that did make it are very well done. Congrats mateys!

Yay! Rank uppp! Congrats to everyone! ^^ Haha, sorry. Right to left for my comics are common. XD

Re: Her first initial design in my sketchbook was a pegasus knight :P xD

You all did awesome, and I'm glad you 4 joined in :b I was getting a bit worried it was gonna be between only 2 artists xD

@Super Yoshi, Ahhh that makes way more sense. And it sounds better in your original version too. Too bad the '?' was cut off...

@Scorpomix, Hey, We've needed a ship, may as well fly, too! xD I thought it was a great comic! If it had been a bit cleaner, I think it could've won.

@Kikloaxer, I think I had learned this from you before, but alas, I still read from Left to Right when I see a comic xD

@Time Paladin, Yes! A comic is still considered an entry drawing if it has you in uniform, so it's official! :b

@BlueT-15, Hey! Please finish it, I'd love to see it still! :b

Congrats to the winners! :D

(oh wait I am magma)
(walks away slowly xD)

Well if you do still want to see it then I guess there's no harm in finishing it. I'll be sure to have it done soon. :D