Building a Better Woman by Jon Corp Productions

While sketching up the planned pic, I realized that I can't give a girl a very feminine face (mostly in the facial structure department), so I took a practice run. Overall, I think I did a good job. Her eyes are kinda creepy and her hair is kinda weird, but I was mostly going for facial structure. I've also decided to use the "icon notes" style on practice sessions. Feels more like a practice session with notes.
Hopefully, I'll have my real pic up by attempt 2.

#Practice #Woman #Girl #Notes

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
09 Feb, 2016, 4:41 pm
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Frettchen

09 Feb, 2016, 8:12 pm

She looks really pretty :)
Some advice:
Try to draw the ears and
eyes a little bit lower and
closer to the nose.
It looks great for your first
session, so just keep drawing ^^

Gills

09 Feb, 2016, 10:39 pm

I have some facial anatomy tips that are universal:

the eyes and ears are almost always parallel to each other if the face is level.

so if you drew a horizonal line across the eyes to the ears, it should end up half through the ears, and level with the middle of the eyes.

(note I do not always follow this but it's a great tip I try to follow)

and it's if the face is straight and level, like your drawing here.

Astrogeon

10 Feb, 2016, 12:55 am

I think this came out very good. If i may suggest, try identifying the distance between parts of the face: the eyes are a bit high up, she almost has no forehead.

Keep at it!
:D

Based_Diablo

10 Feb, 2016, 2:14 am

Try bigger eyes (or at least pupils) and point the nose a little. It might look better to you.
and RE: I'm gonna guess Tharja or Olivia?

Gills

11 Feb, 2016, 12:48 am

Re: Yup! As you can see in my pic (Queen of the Sky), her eyes are slightly higher than her ears, that's because she has her chin up and she's slightly looking up. If you draw anybody looking down, put the eyes /lower/ than the ears.

Interesting that you already used that trick because you commonly draw yourself, with glasses, which pretty much require a straight line xD Cool!

Red99

11 Feb, 2016, 2:00 am

Re: Thanks! And yes, it's pink. But it has wii motion plus so I don't care. xD

Astrogeon

11 Feb, 2016, 7:02 am

Re: Yeah, a lot like Lucy, right? I got the same vibes, but it wasn't intentional.
:>
Heck yeah, it's fun! I got addicted. Real fast, actually.

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