Pretale 1, Page 3) by YamiMidna
Page 3 of the first chapter of #Pretale
First dodging, now Sans starts his own attack... will it hit?
I estimated 6 pages for the first chapter... now it will probably have 7 :v
Would appreciate some feedback about the linework. It is my very first Comic after all (is that obvious? :D)
#Sans #Undertale #Gaster #Pretale #Bones #Comic #wellnotreally #kindalikeamangabutnotamanga #thatsmorelikeit
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03 Feb, 2016, 7:46 pm
Re:Thanks! I hope Red likes it.
03 Feb, 2016, 8:05 pm
This is your FIRST comic?! Excuse me, my life is a waste and I must throw myself off a cliff.
Remember meeeeeeeee!
But seriously, the line work is spot on, space great and the actions are fluid!
03 Feb, 2016, 8:40 pm
Sans is the god of duct tape, he can't miss o^o
The linework is hot, I like the sketchiness and Sans's hand on the right has amazing detail ^^
03 Feb, 2016, 9:20 pm
Reply: *dangles from hookshot with the pointy in through the chest. twitches*
Lol. Well, I do comics but mine look like chicken scratches compared to yours!
My issue is panneling and space. It's like I'm trying to turn every panel into a portrait...
03 Feb, 2016, 9:48 pm
xD
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sorry, but i must...
geeeeeettttt duct on!!!11
04 Feb, 2016, 12:03 am
wow the 3d is awesome! good job XD
04 Feb, 2016, 1:31 pm
hmmm interesting comic, yet I wonder why gaster will kill sans just to get to asgore, guess I'll keep waiting 0w0
p.s. your sans is amazingly perfect in these comics