SSS - Chapter 1 , Part 2 by Serendipity
Fatal snapped open her eyes, illuminating her den with their scarlet glow. She glanced around at the abandoned fox burrow with panic shining in her gaze, desperately seeking out the source of her fear. "Gah. Baka! I'm looking for something that doesn't exist...I used to be fearless...But I've been brought to my knees by a dream! Ugh... I'm so pathetic..." She hung her head in defeat. Somewhere in the distance a twig snapped, causing the moping albino to shake out of her dreary doldrum. (More)
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23 Jul, 2012, 9:05 am
23 Jul, 2012, 9:09 am
i dont see more
23 Jul, 2012, 9:13 am
She smirked, raising to her paws, "Looks like my morning victim is here...perfect timing." Fatal stalked out of her den, leaping into a nearby tree with ease. She camped out on a tree limb and waited for the feline to pass, for she could easily hear it's pawsteps now. A brown and white cat with green eyes appeared, padding through the undergrowth, unaware of the fact that they were being hunted. Fatal swiftly came down upon the tresspasser, taking them by surprise and effortlessly pinning them against the terrain. She leaned in until they were face to face, smiling. "Greetings. I am Fatal. Who are you?" The terrified cat faced her with wide, lashed eyes. "I-I am Redpaw...I was once in Shadowclan bu-" "Shut up." Fatal snapped, placing her claws directly on Redpaw's face. "I am Fatal- the last thing you will see." She smiled cruelly and slowly sank her claws into the flesh of the clan apprentice. "All who trespass on my land d.ie. Prepare to say goodbye.." To be continued in part 3!! Will Fatal k.ill Redpaw? Find out next time!!
23 Jul, 2012, 9:14 am
Thaaaaats because I was writing it -v-III
23 Jul, 2012, 9:28 am
(And yeees the last thing she says rhymes. It's gonna be her catch phrase ^^)
24 Jul, 2012, 1:26 am
Thankeee ^o^ I'm gonna change it a bit... "All who face me die, prepare to say goodbye" Or something .o.
24 Jul, 2012, 9:44 pm
Fatal: prepare to d!e! Frosty: NO NO NO NO NO WAIT! I'll leave! Or, I can tell a joke? Two Warrior Cats walk into a bar... Fatal: Shut up. Frosty: ooooookaaaaaay... Possible story part? .o. P.S. my cat characters' nickname is Frosty.
26 Jul, 2012, 11:53 pm
xDDD Ohyes I'll have to put that in.
27 Jul, 2012, 6:19 pm
I wanna be in (character in casting call!)
27 Aug, 2012, 9:20 pm
ur words r filled with meaning every sentances words describe wats happening perfectly u should seriously become a writer