Just friendly advice though: I don't know if you were trying to make this with realistic perspective or height (buildings) but if you were, it's a lil' bit weird. The perspective for Ted's arm is not needee here too.
@Aria: Whoa an actual critique! :O The buildings were meant to be farther away, which is why they look small. But I guess I made them too small :/ Also his arm looks like that since I meant for it to move away from the viewer(usually walking poses look like that).
Thanks for the critique btw! I'll keep those in mind.
@Reema: Well, for the buildings, with the hint the ground give us about the space between the buildings and Ted, I think it's pretty hard to tell that they actually are pretty far appart. And for his arm, again, if I look at how you used perspective for the ground and compare it with how you used perspective for the arm, the arm's is ''becoming small way too fast'' (sorry, my english's weird ;-; ) , it's just a pretty confusing use if the method.
Well, everytime there's something that bothers me with your drawing, I can tell you if you want. I'll be glad to help you! :]
Comments
17 Jan, 2016, 11:17 pm
So cool! you draw really good. ^ ^
17 Jan, 2016, 11:32 pm
THIS LOOKS SO RAD, AHHH.
THE PERSPECTIVE IS FANTASTIC!
17 Jan, 2016, 11:34 pm
Amazing!:)
It's a cool character!^w^
17 Jan, 2016, 11:49 pm
AHHH THIS LOOKS SO AWESOME!! Ted is great, I love the shading ;o;
he has a nice figure here just saying
18 Jan, 2016, 12:03 am
Awesome :D
Just friendly advice though: I don't know if you were trying to make this with realistic perspective or height (buildings) but if you were, it's a lil' bit weird. The perspective for Ted's arm is not needee here too.
That's my opinion, just trying to help. :]
18 Jan, 2016, 12:42 am
@Aria: Whoa an actual critique! :O
The buildings were meant to be farther away, which is why they look small. But I guess I made them too small :/
Also his arm looks like that since I meant for it to move away from the viewer(usually walking poses look like that).
Thanks for the critique btw! I'll keep those in mind.
18 Jan, 2016, 1:03 am
Your art style is so cute
18 Jan, 2016, 1:57 am
@Reema: Well, for the buildings, with the hint the ground give us about the space between the buildings and Ted, I think it's pretty hard to tell that they actually are pretty far appart. And for his arm, again, if I look at how you used perspective for the ground and compare it with how you used perspective for the arm, the arm's is ''becoming small way too fast'' (sorry, my english's weird ;-; ) , it's just a pretty confusing use if the method.
Well, everytime there's something that bothers me with your drawing, I can tell you if you want. I'll be glad to help you! :]
18 Jan, 2016, 1:58 am
*of the method
18 Jan, 2016, 2:10 am
@Aria: Don't worry I understand. This was extremely helpful. Thanks. :0
18 Jan, 2016, 3:29 am
You're welcome dear! ^^