story of mandy slander by loomy doom
far away from villages was a little filly named mandy. she lived in a cottage with her mother and father. mandy was the silent type. but either way she had to stay quiet or else her father would beat her. mandy's dad would say "im going to the village to sell somethings, ill be back soon." but every time he came home he would be drunk and he would have no money. mandy's mom would get mad at him but she kept it to her self. one morning mandy woke up and heard yelling and crying. mandy crawled
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21 Jul, 2012, 11:56 pm
out of bed and tip toed down stairs and saw a unbeliveable sight! mandy's father kicked her mother and called her mean names. "LISTEN HERE I DO WHAT I WANT WHEN I WANT!" her father hollered. mandy's mom was spitting and coughing up blood. "WHAT A ABOUT MANDY!? WE NEED MONEY TO FEED HER!" her mother hollered back. her father growled and started to pound her mother. mandy couldn't stand it anymore so she tugged on her dad's tail and said "stop it daddy, stop it!". her father stopped and turned around and saw a brown, red haired filly crying. his face switched from anger to sadness. he hugged mandy and patted her mane. "im sorry, im sorry." he said bringing down his voice. mandy looked at her mother, she was bruised and was still coughing up blood. mandy frowned and began to cry again. SHOULD I CONTINUE?
22 Jul, 2012, 12:11 am
lol she looks my oc pony chocolate apple
22 Jul, 2012, 12:15 am
Cool story I think you should continue.
22 Jul, 2012, 12:37 am
the room was quiet and mandy's father sat her down on the floor and wiped away her tears. "uhh me and your mother was just... talking, go up stairs and play." her father said looking at her mother. "b-but daddy" mandy stuttered "NOW!" he yelled. the sound of mandy's father woke up her mother. when mandy walked past her mother her mother quickly grabbed her and hugged her. mandy's mom let go of her and mandy looked at her eyes and they said "ill be fine". mandy walked back up stairs and crawled back in to bed. it was quiet but then she herd yelling again. mandy whimpered hoping everything would get better. time passed by and the yelling stopped. mandy was playing with her dolls and her mother walked in her room. mandy gasped and and ran in to her mother's hooves. mandy's mom picked her and kissed her on her cheek and sat her on the bed. mandy's mom smile and patted her mane. "honey, me and your daddy was just arguing. nothing happened okay?" mandy's mom said comforting her.
22 Jul, 2012, 1:10 am
sad, story! you should make a happy one now.but, i love it!
22 Jul, 2012, 1:36 am
END OF CHAPTER 1
22 Jul, 2012, 5:01 am
lol its alright and the story was great!
22 Jul, 2012, 12:59 pm
Awesome writing! :D
31 Jul, 2012, 6:34 pm
Y u no have more pictures!?