D Y S P H O R I A by AlphaGlitch
WOW HELLA LONG PLAYBACK
ok hi
soooo first piece of actual art here yay
I'm really not good at this app yet ;w;
(also I did this on Pokemon Art Academy first, I'm so uncreative lol)
Anyway, here's an OC. Their name is Dysphoria. That's about it :0
(( any constructive criticism would be really nice!! ;v; ))
#DysphoriaOC #originalcharacter #3d #oc
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05 Mar, 2016, 11:02 pm
This piece might come across to you as old by now, but, what with you having asked for some, here is some long-overdue constructive criticism!
If this is your style, which it appears to be (having scrolled through your gallery... what is this? A poem? XD I've literally made two rhymes already...Wait... O-O), there really isn't much to criticize, save for the position of the back left leg, which could be lower, even if it's lifted off the ground, as well as adding a bit of contrast to the outline that separates said leg from the tail, so that it's more evident that the leg is in the foreground (maybe a deep, bluish-purple would help). Maybe the, erm... hindquarters (X'D) could be lowered as well, to be more anatomically proportionate.
I apologize for the extensive length of this comment. xp
14 Nov, 2016, 4:49 am
I went to the beginning of your art because why not
You've really improved!
Great job!