A HalloWITZKE Special, Part 4 by Witzke

Please note, that the story is written in the comments.

The next part is up! If you missed the last ones or wanna catch up, you can find te-hem here - #aHalloWITZKEspecial! Please iet me know what you think! I hope that you will all enjoy! : D

#Witzke #Hallowitzke #Series #Halloween #Pokemon #Zoaruah #Victeenie #Skwertle #Pokemon

Comments
9+
share
like
used tools icons

painting stats

painted on a Nintendo 3DS
04 Nov, 2015, 10:46 pm
00:48

Comments

Witzke

04 Nov, 2015, 10:55 pm

So, everyone had split up, both to get away from the Reaper, and to figure out a plan. Skwertle and Victeenie, stumbled across the kitchen, "Ah yeas, wonderful!" Victeenie says to Skwertle, "Good work slave, you have found the kitchen! Now go make me a sandwhich!" Skwertle rolls his eyes and responds to Victeenie, "Is all you can think about sandwhiches!? ... I'm going to do something usefull and go look around for something that might help us." Skwertle begins looking in cupboards. "Fine then," Victeenie says annoyedly to Skwertle, "I'll just make my own sandwhich...your sandwhiches probably taste bad anyways!" Vicyeenie immediately walks to the fridge, and to his surprise, finds a sandwhich already prepared. He then brings it over to Skwertle and brags, "Hah, see that? I've already made the sandwhich! It didn't even take a minute! You know, you could learn some things from me you know!" Skwertle tries to ignore Victeenie, and continue searching.

Witzke

04 Nov, 2015, 11:05 pm

Meanwhile, Peekatchu and Charmandah come across a room with a mini bowling alley, "WOW!" Charmandah says, "I can't believe the Grim Reaper has a mini bowling alley!" Peekatchu picks ups a bowling bowl, "Hey what are you doing?" Charmandah asks Peekatchu. Peekatchu answers, "I'm sorry Charmandah, but it's just too tempting!" Peekatchu bowls the ball and it instantly goes into the gutter. They both stand there, and then break into laughter. Charmandah then picks up a ball and says, "Here, let me try!" He bowls the ball and it's a strike. Charmandah and Peekatchu cheer! "Congratulations..." Someone says. Charmandah responds, "Thanks Peekatchu! I guess I'm a good bowl-" Peekatchu interrupts him and tells him, "Um, Charmandah...That wasn't me..." They both turn around. "Noooow, it's myyyyy turn!..." The Grim Reaper, standing behind them raises his sycthe. Charmndah and Peekatchu look at each other, and scream. Charmandah pushes the Reaper over, and they run out of the room screaming.

Witzke

04 Nov, 2015, 11:23 pm

Their screams echo across the hallways, and Snyvee hears them, "Well, sounds like those two were captured. I kind of expected them to be the first to go." Mudkip begins walking around, opening and closing doors reapeatedly. Snyvee comes up and quietly yells at him, "Mudkip stop that! You're making too much noise!" Mudkip opens up another door and unveils a music room, full of a wide assortment of musical instruments. "Huh," Snyvee says, "Look at what you've found. Let's go in and see if there's anything interesting in here." Snyvee begins walking around, and searching things. Mudkip walks up to an old jukebox, with a quarter slot. The quarter operrated rides outside of stores instantly comes to mind, so Mudkip plops in a quarter, and climbs on top, hoping for it to begin moving. Loud 50's styled music begins to play, and spooks Snyvee, "MUDKIP! What did you just do!?! You're giving us away!!!" Mudkip just sits there, happily enjoying the ride.

Witzke

04 Nov, 2015, 11:31 pm

That music begins to echo throughout the haunted house, as Charmelein and Daisy find themselves a ballroom, "Wow, is this some kind of room where people dance?" Charmelein asks. Daisy then answers, "Yeah, I think so..." They then both hear the music playing. Charmelein then asks, "Hey, do yoy hear that? It's sounds like music..." Daisy replies, "Yeah, it does..." The two pause for a bit, then Charmelein grabs Daisy by the hand, and proceeds to ask her, "May I have this dance, milady?" Daisy blushes, "I'm not sure now's the best time for a dance...but..ok...!" She puts her hands around Charmelein and the two begin dancing. Meanwhile, Snyvee in the music room, finds a guitar, grabs it, and smashes the jukebox, "THERE!" Mudkip hops off the ride, then Snyvee comes up to him and quietly yells at him, "Were you trying to get us kiIIed?!" Mudkip just stares at her with his signature derpy face. Charmelein and Daisy both notice the music stopped, "Hey, what happened to the music?"

Witzke

05 Nov, 2015, 3:28 pm

Daisy looks around, and then suddenly clings to Charmelein. Charmelein, thinking it is an act of affection, blushes. Daisy then points over to the left. Charmelein looks over his shoulder and standing behind them is the Grim Reaper, "Oh, hi there, he he..." Charmelein says. Charmelein and Daisy walk backwards slowly, until Charmelein notices the rug under the Reaper's feet. He quickly grabs it, and tugs it from beneath him, making him fall over. Daisy and Charmelein dart off, but the Reaper is quick to follow. Meanwhile, Chezpin and Deeno open a door, and come across a room full of hunting equipment, "Wow!" Chezpin says in amazement, "We're sure to find something helpful in here!" They begin searching the area. Chezpin soon finds a box, opens it up, and finds something, "Deeno! Come look at this!" Chezpin calls out. Deeno rushes over to take a look, and Chezpin continues, "Do you know what this is? It's a large fishing net! We can use it to catch the Grim Reaper!"

Witzke

05 Nov, 2015, 3:38 pm

Just then, Charmelein's screams are heard echoing across the hallway, "Help! Someone? Anyone!?!?" Chezpin hears it and tells Deeno, "Quick Deeno! We gotta go help them out!" They then run to the foyer where the screams echoed from.

Back at the party, Zoaruah is just lying down, waiting, until finally the Gallade gets off, "Ah, I need to stand up now, I've been sitting for long enough." he says. Zoaruah gets back up, "Yes! now I can continue! It's about time!" Zoaruah begins crawling across the floor in his box. He almost reaches the table, until he comes across a Nidoking sitting on a chair, "Oh good!" he says, "I could use a foot rest right about now!" He then puts his feet on top of the box, once again blocking Zoaruah's advance. Zoaruah begins hitting the floor, "ARE YOU KIDDING ME!?!" He yells quietly. Zoaruah begins waiting again, then stops, "That's it!" He says. The Nidoking is lounging, with his eyes closed. Zoaruah moves from under him and quickly goes under the table.

Witzke

05 Nov, 2015, 3:53 pm

That about does it for this part! And I appologise for the lag time. I was typing the second to last comnent, when Colors suddenly crashed, and it wouldn't let me on for the resto of the night. I'm not sure how many people will actually see this now. Feedback is greatly appreciated, so please let me know what you thought, if you like it, or anything really so I know you read it. I'd like to thank you for taking the time to read this. It means a lot, and I appologise if I sound a little beggy. Well, I hope you all enjoyed! : D

crypt

05 Nov, 2015, 4:55 pm

re: yeah, i guess. also, great story fam !! oh and do you have Skype?

Penplat

05 Nov, 2015, 8:17 pm

Zoaruah's stealth operation could be going better. XD

Still enjoying the story!

Bowpmsas

06 Nov, 2015, 2:56 am

So, Victeenie is nothing without sandwiches and Zoaruah's box functions as possible furniture. Interesting... CX

This story is going great, man! Keep up the awesome work! ; D

Im_A_pony_Rawr

06 Nov, 2015, 1:56 pm

eyelashes XD you are so gape XD

StorytellerEspeon

21 Nov, 2015, 6:38 pm

Still VERY GOOD!!! Zoaruah seems to be having a hard time but that's what happens when you break the rules! XD

I'm getting pretty excited to read the ending now! What's gonna happen at the haunted house?

Please login to leave comments

delete comment?

just delete
delete comment and prevent this user from commenting on your paintings
report as inappropriate

English

Japanese