Thy Kin Bear a Curse by Pink-Espeon

That wont be the official title i just needed to fill that.
This is going to be my biggest drawing yet. I'd like any critic to make it flawless

Atm I need to wait until a friend of mine can get back on her feet. She's been sad b/c her dog passed. <:3 Hope you feel better if you see this!

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
28 Jul, 2015, 8:53 pm
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pillowblanket

29 Jul, 2015, 12:31 am

Ooooo this looks really good omg!!!! My advice is the character on the (furthest) right looks really tense, :-0 it looks like he's giving the soldier's stance while everyone looks relaxed! Maybe you could push his shoulder a little down and back?? Otherwise it looks amazing and I can't wait to see it finished!! >:-D

Greenookie

29 Jul, 2015, 1:28 am

I already know it's going to be even more beautiful and amazing when it's finished... I can't wait to see it when it's finished!!!
*squee*

Emma-Pond

29 Jul, 2015, 2:18 am

I can't wait to see how this turns out! X3

MEDICI

29 Jul, 2015, 3:04 am

The girl next to the girl in the middle(Celeste right?) her arm lookslike

MEDICI

29 Jul, 2015, 3:06 am

Wait I didn't finished lol scumbag iPad
Anyways it looks like it has no joint so try defining that she has shoulders and an elbow
Also like what @gnawing said the guy looks to tense :O that's it

MEDICI

29 Jul, 2015, 3:07 am

*dumb iPad

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