My first sunday poem by Vital Furious

When I go outside I sit down.
And look at the stars with a frown.
I continue to make a long face.
As I look deep into space.
The wonders unknown to man.
To comprehend, I dont think I can.
#sundaypoem

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
21 Jul, 2015, 5:21 pm
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Vital Furious

22 Jul, 2015, 3:28 am

Yeah, i really love it, expect more

JJMAwaken

24 Jul, 2015, 1:21 am

pretty nice!

Pooky

24 Jul, 2015, 9:54 pm

i like this one! :3

Vital Furious

25 Jul, 2015, 1:16 am

thanks so much

Haiiro

25 Jul, 2015, 2:10 am

Awesome poem!

Vital Furious

27 Jul, 2015, 4:06 am

thanks hairro, i love yours too

Rosegarden

23 Oct, 2015, 6:22 pm

I Realy like it it's prety

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