space squad by metamorphosis

Ok It is a PROVEN FACT that drawing while listening to mario paint's "creative exercise" makes the experience comedic and better
anyways time for height differences
idk forest's heught so rip
jasper is the tallest(?) he's about 5'12
piper is like four inches shorter
sol is 5'1
ajax is an inch shorter
and orion is six feet but he isn't an honorary squad member >:(
#Bellista #Profeta #Spacedeer
also i accidentally started liking the idea of jasper having a crush on piper HELP it was a crACKSHI p

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
20 Jul, 2015, 1:33 am
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wariotime99

20 Jul, 2015, 1:53 am

YES, I'M ACTUALLY BEHIND THAT SHIP!

AND THEN AJAX AND FOR- *Shot*

Anyway... :P

I had some random Spacedeer ideas, mostly for planets and races, but for a little of the story...

I read SOME Spacedeer, but not much (I read one of them), so I don't know what's already in it...

So... First off! Jasper's Species!
You decide the name of it. :P

They were an interesting race, boasting many brilliant scholars and scientists, but, they were also MASSIVE sports fanatics, with stadiums spotting the small planet. This was pretty much all they did... Sleep, Eat, Learn, Watch/Compete.

Until a radioactive experiment went wrong, and the next generation was mutated...

It wasn't anything SUPER major, other than a few physical sizes changing... But, the biggest problem was a black film now covered their eyes, blinding them.

They couldn't read, and they couldn't watch or compete anymore.

Now, with VERY careful surgery, the film can be removed, but the patient will need special glasses to see...

firebug

20 Jul, 2015, 2:30 am

VERY CUTE SHIPS AAAAACK
NO DON'T READ IT I'M REWRITINF IT N O O O IT'S TRASH RN BECAUSE I ACCIDENTALLY BROUGHT A PROBLEM AT THE BEGINNINF OF THE STORY AND IT'S RUINED
ooh, that actually sounds great! I'll probably use some or most of it if I can't come up with anything else! thank you!
but what I'd jasp just had like no eyes at all who knows not i

wariotime99

20 Jul, 2015, 3:01 am

Yeah, I know. :P

Anyway, STORY S**T.

When I read a bit of SD, I noticed it really lacked... Story?

Here's an idea...

Need a good basis for a few storylines? What if the SPACE POLICE (OMGOMGOMGOMFG), was actually really corrupt, and Ajax was the only really reasonable one.

Soon, the other Officers get sick of Ajax, and send him off on a suicide mission, without him knowing it was a suicide mission...

So, he does the mission and dies the end!

No, he manages to survive, and afterwards learns that it was a suicide mission to get him killed.

He quits the Police, to work for a smaller, lesser known and less corrupt Bounty Hunting agency. Technically, these guys are more Police than the official ones, actually being made of former Policemen, and Soldiers, whereas the Space Police is made of 'Reformed Criminals' and other people who are good at shooting and punching stuff.

In this offshoot agency, he meets up with a bunch of outcast misfits of different kinds, and makes A SPACE SQUAD.

NightPoppy

20 Jul, 2015, 5:51 am

Poot poot :0 Bell Bell I have been inactive WHAT IS THIS SPACE STUFF MY CHILD
TIS INTERESTING

firebug

20 Jul, 2015, 2:22 pm

Yes that's why I hated it it was too rushed why do I do it
but yO that's a good story hOW DO YOU COME UP WITH THESE SO FAST AADYEIEOKDNDHIDKXN
YES SPACE SWAUAAAD okay I'll end up using some of it
aLsO NiGHTY it's a new storyline/universe I created and they're all in space and they're aLIENS well ajax used to be human but eYY you can check our the tag if you want

NightPoppy

20 Jul, 2015, 9:44 pm

Oi neato :0 I SHALL

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