AstroClass N Sc:1 Pt:15 by Astrogeon
Dialogue:
>Sergio: I'm not sure what happened, but I'm not going miss my chance to strike.
>Nelly: (Darn! I can't move at all. What now?)
>Sergio: Alright, this attack's called Scythe Cycle! Here goes! Hyaah!
*sythe sounds*
>Nelly: (I'm going to lose...!)
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I forgot I had this comic piece raring to go. Also, please tell me if there's something wrong with the dialogue. I want it to sound... not boring.
Ah, well, lets see what happens in the next part.
'Till then!
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17 Jul, 2015, 2:48 pm
This is a pretty dire situation for Nelly! Uh oh 0.0 Great new page!
17 Jul, 2015, 3:25 pm
I wouldn't say the dialogue is boring, just brief. That's normal though because it's only four panels. I think you're good to continue as you are.
17 Jul, 2015, 4:56 pm
re: haha, nice pun, and thanks!!