Boo by HowlingZero
#Raymund
Grr.
Alright, so I -sorta- like this, but something feels off. I want to make it look like he's really turning into his swing with his whole body so it feels more powerful and visceral. But maybe I overdid it...? I mean it's fine to take artistic liberties and exaggerate but I don't want any broken backs 'ere. Anyways, tips are much appreciated, I want this to turn out.
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22 Jun, 2015, 9:05 pm
have you ever looked in a mirror and turned to see your back? You'll notice that there's some side wrinkles, also you could make it look like the wind is blowing against him, not from behind, but to be honest this looks fine the way it is.
22 Jun, 2015, 9:20 pm
Maybe more speedlines in the direction of the wind? I don't know, the pose and character look great big the swing and the blue trail is missing something...
22 Jun, 2015, 9:40 pm
I'm not sure, but I think you may have inlongated his torso a bit, his midsection. I think that's it. Otherwise, you got it.
22 Jun, 2015, 10:21 pm
this looks awesome you really know how to draw people well
05 Jul, 2015, 7:22 pm
A little late but I think that his left arm looks a little odd sticking out straight like that. Maybe a little lower or closer to his head?