Vannesa:You can rest easy now...Mike. I'll handle this!
Mike:NO VANNESA,HOW THE HEII ARE YOU GOING TO BEAT SOMEONE I COULDN'T?
Vannesa:*Summons Phsychic gauntlets*Just sit back and sip some tea.I can handle this
If you're wondering why she still has the same bland outfit.It's because when Mike saved her they werent expecting Vannesa to be a fighter.But during the fight she's about to get in.Her clothes are destroyed,barely anything concealing her body.So Shiro is forced to create battle armor.
The Colors! Gallery moderators will look at it as soon as possible.
Comments
19 Jun, 2015, 3:03 am
Nice job! :)
19 Jun, 2015, 6:52 am
Not to sound pervy, but I think I finally foung the perfect boob sizefor her. Not over the top anime big, and not too small to take her gender into consideration :) This is the official design of Vannesa! *Stamps seal of approval on Vannesa's shoulder*
19 Jun, 2015, 9:42 am
Realistic. He can never become godly. No one can... Unless they become a Limitless. Roshaun wants to become powerful. But just enough to get his revange. Also Roshaun has a robotic arm that can be broken. So it depends on his situation. He's not stupid. He doesn't fight battles he can't win. He doesn't play by the rules. He has an attitude, etc. He's not a simple person to understand OR get along with... Like you and Isolda! XD
19 Jun, 2015, 1:17 pm
Yo hypno my series is just getting started you might like it :P
20 Jun, 2015, 4:50 am
Yeah. But its going to be different though.
20 Jun, 2015, 6:18 pm
Nice, she looks like this strong female character and not like a damsel in distress which is really good :)
Though you really shouldn't have made the background purple too, because that sort of keeps the attention away from the armor and the hair, people now immediately look at her shirt, which is not where you want them to look... right?
20 Jun, 2015, 6:19 pm
Oh and answering your question... Practise is the key ^^
22 Jun, 2015, 7:50 pm
It's okay, you'll learn from this :)
It's good that she's not a damsell... Or just plain useless like Sakura in Naruto (the first one).
She might not be as strong/powerfull as the others, but she can be useful in her own way. Like being smart or something.
30 Jul, 2015, 3:12 am
Same. I'll be learning how to drive soon, and I've been trying to get a job so I can start making money! But my family wants me to focus on school... So thats what I'm doing at the moment. Also I've been improving my writing, reading and drawing skills! I'm already on chapter 3 of my story! :D
19 Aug, 2015, 11:35 pm
Good. gettin a lot of ideas. I'm making my book in 1st person. From Roshauns' perspective. I'm also goin to have a bad guy perspective. My book will be fantacy/action.
20 Aug, 2015, 7:46 am
Haha yup, though I maybe should've done a bit more for school XD
Good to hear you're coming back, I actually had a feeling that this time you left for good.