Church by Johnson
An older sketch i finished today. i thought about putting in a dragon, but in the end some cliché birds had to do.
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11 Nov, 2009, 8:58 pm
It appears i drew in a too dark room. :*(
13 Nov, 2009, 10:03 am
not bad.
15 Nov, 2009, 12:51 pm
"It appears I drew in a too dark room!" Hmm... what do you mean? I want to comment on this paint, which I really like, but would first like to understand your meaning. :)
15 Nov, 2009, 12:55 pm
The contrast is too low, a lot of the details got lost. everything "popped" more on the DS Screen than it does on my big screen.
15 Nov, 2009, 2:27 pm
Ah, I see. I copied & pasted into Irfan to view against a black background. The foreground pops more, but I was going to suggest darkening the two sides of the buildings that have windows to push the contrast more against the light from within. Tough to judge on a DS screen, but I think the painting is very nice.
16 Nov, 2009, 9:47 am
I think the main problem is that the top half is too bright and the bottom part is too dark. it's a poor composition i only realized at the very end. i tried to compensate with the birds, but those can only do so much... but thanks for your kind critique, means a lot to me!
18 Jan, 2010, 11:19 pm
i like it. although, i'll have to study more about composition to give a more educated assessment of this painting. :)