Part 1: Angel Fallen by SmutGhostie

The gift of sight is one most take for granted. For eighteen year old Lina, she will never forget, and always regret, the night she lost her eyes. Though the road is paved with blood, and she cannot see it.

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
08 Jun, 2015, 1:15 am
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SmutGhostie

08 Jun, 2015, 1:28 am

Rust, the sound of chains and the smell of fire was the first thing to reach my senses. My head was pounding, and a searing pain reachec my conciousness. I screamed out and the wail of sirens called in the distance.
The last few things I remembered was me and my best friends laughing, we were cruising down the dark, winding country road. Then a loud crackling sound came to my ears, and everything had turned black. That was the last thing I remembered.

The sirens were close now, and I tried to open my eyes I felt a torrent of fluid rush down my face. I slowly gathered myself and stood up with a slight stagger. The pain was intense, so much that I felt my stomach churning.

SmutGhostie

08 Jun, 2015, 1:42 am

I felt my way around, trying to feel someone, anyone. Were my friends okay? I had to find out, I heard a gasp, though it sounded gurgled. Like someone had just awoken from drowning. I tried to move toward the sound, but I only heard a few groans and it was gone. I hoped that it wasnt one of my friends!

The darkness around me began to give way, though it was like looking through melted glass. My eyes began to burn more, I saw a tall black figure approach me. I then heard its voice, it was a strong male voice with a deep tone " Ma'am I need you to please sit down,"
I ofcourse did as I was told, my tears finally came, I began to shake and sob. I heard his voice calling for an ambulance over his radio.
Within moments, new squeels were comming towards me. Soon i was laid down, the smell of sterility. The air was cool and it felt amazing against my face. I heard a young womans voice saying " Can you give me your name?"
"Lina" I choked out
"Okay Lina, any immediate family?"
"No,"

SmutGhostie

08 Jun, 2015, 1:59 am

"Anyone we can contact?"
"no" I murmer through my pain. The girl the explained to me I had been in a horendous car accident, and that I needed to go into surgery immediately.

"S-surgery?! W-what is wrong with me?!" I cried out, but I didnt get a response. I wasn't sure what was going on. My pulse began to run rampant,a ringing in my ears.
Everything that happened next came as a blurr, but soon i felt a mask cover my nose and mouth. A soft voice calming me and a gentle hand on my forehead. Soon the sleep came, the last thought in my mind, melted away into a deep and painless dream.

"Death wins nothing here, gnawing wings that amputate- then spread, lift up, fly." Aberjhani
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