He's both cool and kinda adorable. ^-^

Very cool design. Looks as good as professional's.

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Looks better than professional to me. He has a style all his own.

Good job here. I hate to bring this part up, as I'm not so good at that myself, but maybe his hand could've been worked on more. Not gonna bug you much for a design pic, though; I never put 100'/. into concept drawings. Save that for other stuff. ^^

Just thought of something... He looks somewhat like a Fire Emblem character in a futuristic setting... Any chance he's named after the FE:A character?

-Tempo
Yeh, "futuristic Fire Emblem" was kinda the feel I was going for.
Although, I wouldn't say Gregor from Awakening was a thought. But in Blazing sword, there's a "Raymund" quiet guy, big sword, coulda been an influence for sure. I'm not actually too huge on most Awakening designs (although the lords and tactician classes look great), so I usually take influence from the older games.

This looks cool dude. The cloak thing looks like a rockin' batman fire emblem thing! I'm looking forward to the rest!

I figured he inspired the name. And yeah, futuristic FE is exactly what he looks like. XD So, good job there!

I continue to love these characters. Ray looks great. If you went professional with this and released a manga or anime I would buy it, because I love your character designs.

-AnneChovy
Ha! That'd be interesting for sure. But in my mind, I've always had these characters in the context of a Xenoblade-style kinda rpg.
Doing anything professional with these peeps is a bit of a pipe dream though, unfortunately. xP

How do you know that? Lesser ideas have recieved funding. Maybe you will be a pro at some point, if you strive for it. Shoot, if you did a manga right now, I'd read just because I like your designs and ideas, and your style.

Was that a pun?
I love you even more now.

wow nice male body drawing skillz lol
I cant draw boys well at all. :')