Behind the laugh, a sob. by Awesuh

You won't see my pain,
I'll hide it from view.
I don't want my tears,
to get to you.

Every once in a while bad poetry just kind pops in my head. This one came with a picture so I decided to post both and ask you, the good folks of colors 3d, to tell me what you thought of my poem.

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
14 May, 2015, 3:00 am
04:23

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btc120

14 May, 2015, 10:14 am

very good

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