Mike: By the way, why is your house so...so purple.
Shiro: Oh that, yeah my wif...... I just like... purple... that's all.

Nice outfit. Maybe draw the lower part next time too :)

How? Why can't Roshaun be a hero? Why does everything have to be about Mark? I HATE how everyone compairs Mark to Naruto... And its true, they are very similer characters. I'm tired of seeing the same looking characters in anime. Its time for something new. Something ORIGINAL. A character that stands out! That NO ONE can compair to others! Roshaun Zephyr is the one. His own name has more epic meaning behind it. Way more then Mark Holy did... :P

I was the same way at first to. After I made Roshaun I thought he looked so different... I was almost not going to use him. But after I got use to him, and learned more about him. I ended up loving him more then Mark... Then I was able to see how undeveloped Mark was. I don't even know his personality. And I can't have him be a goofy,crying,weak kid then when he grows up he is all mean,strong,smart and cool guy,etc. Thats just to unrealistic... I like everything about Roshaun Zephyr. His name, outfit, personality, back story, EVERYTHING! Just give it time buddy. Everyone will like him after seeing who he is. :)

Roshaun: Yeah, so relax kid. Its not the end of the world. Get over it! :P

Dang... Roshaun! you don't have to be so mean! xD

Roshaun: He asked for it! I can't have him disrespect me like that! Who does he think he is? - .-

Ok. I know Roshaun. But he didn't mean it. Its just your still new to him! XD

Roshaun: Sureee like thats the REAL reason!
ROSHAUN OK! LMAO

Mark: Guys i'm not gone... I just wont be the main character. I'm still going to be in the story. I'll even be one of Roshauns teach-

Roshaun: You guys are so childish. grow up already! I'M RUNNING THE SHOW NOW! >:)

Actually I'M running the show Roshaun...

Roshaun: Yeah.Yeah. Whatever... - .-

So he's going to be a ninja like Naruto?
...It's just my opinion here, but I think it'd be more interesting if you added something new and original.

The weapon seems really cool, but I still think the pouch is useless. I mean if you don't have time to summon a weapon, how do you have time to open a pouch, grab something and throw it? Kunai and Shuriken are only used by Ninja, so it also seems out of place for him to have it.

Okay he does it kinda fast, but does it take that long to summon a weapon? Take Kingdom Hearts for example, Sora can summon the keyblade in a splitsecond!
I like the idea of non invincible weapons and now I understand why he needs a backup plan...
I still don't think you should use kunai and shuriken, but that's up to you :)

How about a regular sword which he slways carries. Of course it'll be weaker than his summoned weapon, but he has it as a backup. If you think that's too big, how about a dagger? I just think having shurikens or kunai are useless when you're fighting an opponent who can break your main weapon.

hey my old account was gohan4real we used to be friends we had friend codes truth be told I finished the naruto series and I am now watching the new ones every thursday in japanese I'd be happy to get your friend code again

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They're OCs from @Jiah_And_Miah, I also was surprised how profesional their designs look.

Wired choice of words... But I'll assume you're trying to say are we still friends? And the answer is obviously yes. xD