i just found 6 mistakes in this ok please also excuse the messy art, it is now 8 in the morning

Omg this is so depressing...

Mind if I write a short story here? Not much to do with this though.

g o o d my desired effect
Of course! I love reading your writing anyways. :P

Set during the point where I broke the Universes, also, not as depressing.

Everyone went out for the day, be it for work or something else. Gate desided to stay home.

Yu came back first. He heard Gate watching TV, fairly normal. Then he heard the My Little Pony theme... 'Oh sh.it... ohsh.itohsh.itohSH.ITOHSH.IT!' Yu thought, as he stepped through the doorway. "Yu..." Gate says. Gate never calls him Yu. "W-what is this?" He says, his voice wavering. Yu bites his bottom lip, and slowly walks into the Living Room. "Well... Um..." He mumbles, 'HOW DO YOU TELL SOMEONE THEY AREN'T REAL?' Ran through the Inventor's mind. "Well, you're... From a little girls TV show..." Yu says quietly. "I-I know these Ponies... They are not real?" Gate asks, a tone of sadness coming to his speech. Yu nods. "Does that mean... I'm not..." Yu hesitates, and nods again. "Then how am I..." Gate says, tears starting to come to his eyes. Yu then does the stupidest thing, he walks away, back to his room.

(Cont.)

"I'M SUCH AN IDIOT!" Yu yells in the confines of his room. "Why did I just do that? I had SO many things I could've done instead, but I had to straight up tell him he doesn't exist!"

An hour later, Yu finally desides to leave his pit of self loathing, and leave his room. Gate was still watching MLP... Why did today have to be a marathon? Gate seemed to have a different demeanor though... He looked interested instead of sad, easier to tell because he took off his helmet. Yu squeaked out, "Gate... You ok?" Gate doesn't look away from the screen, "I hath done some searching on the internet... And I discovered something..." Yu gulps, and asks, "What?" "What is fiction for you, is real for us... Be it this My Little Pony, Minecraft, or Pokemon, we do exist... Just not here." Yu cracks a small smile, and sits down next to Gate, putting his arm around him. "I-I really couldn't have said it better myself." Yu says. "Just... Don't tell Fluffers and Elecjudo, they're too volitile." (Cont.)

"What dos thou mean by, 'Volitile?'" Gate asks. "Elecjudo has anger issues, and Fluffers is a living nuculear bomb." Yu says blankly. "Right. I shant."

Then the door slams open, and the sound of someone hitting the ground is heard. "I BROUGHT PIZZA." Shouts a fairly drunk Fluffers.

So... The End. :3

(I've talked about YuXGate before, but this is one of the only times it KINDA happened.)

That was great. xD
Imagining Gate eventually growing to sing along with the theme.
Ship radars going off weewoo