That can´t be the finale, can it!? by Whoever

Oh gosh, I wanted to write a real ending, I really did, but then this happened... that´s a new level of meta parody, even for me!

I´m gonna write a real ending if you want to, though.

But I feel like this is the reason it´s been like the fifth time I´ve been trying to write the story and the reason I´m still having issues with it. It´s the same thing with all the stories I gave up on on like the 3rd page or so only that I wasn´t so determined to finish them...

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23 Mar, 2015, 2:15 pm
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Xerveltal Yneas

23 Mar, 2015, 2:28 pm

Well, if you're not making a real ending... the story looks like it's never ended. But I'll love to see your normal artwork! :D

Whoever

23 Mar, 2015, 2:41 pm

Hey, thanks! :)
Yeah I guess I´ll still be around and upload stuff. I´m done with daily schedule tho :V

Time Paladin

23 Mar, 2015, 3:35 pm

Love this ending though! XD

Personally, I think it's a matter of whether you want a story to be character driven or plot driven. The mistake might not've been that you made the characters before the story, but that you were going for something more plot orriented when it should've focused on the characters and their motives. I still really enjoyed it though, and I'd love to see the ending you want it to have. : )

KinsKat

23 Mar, 2015, 3:56 pm

Your style is very unique. I'm honored to follow your work. Name's Kat, nice to meet you. ^_^

Whoever

23 Mar, 2015, 4:29 pm

@TP:
Yeah, maybe that´s true.
But I think that even in a character-driven story it´s more important to write characters that you think would make a good l story instead of writing cool characters and thinking they will make a good story somehow.

Whoever

23 Mar, 2015, 4:30 pm

Oh, and thanks for the follow, Kat :D

Plushypie

23 Mar, 2015, 7:18 pm

Though I hardly write stories, it's good to decide if it's plot driven or character driven.
Even then, you should have a clear cut story planned out, from beginning to start.

I loved the comics though!

Karkitty

23 Mar, 2015, 8:13 pm

iPHONE HEAD

Bowpmsas

24 Mar, 2015, 10:49 pm

Well, ya' never know. Sometimes "The End." doesn't necessarily mean "the end." C ;

Smash

25 Mar, 2015, 10:28 am

Honestly, this is probably the better of the possible endings. Personally, I would've made the green guy look more like Kermit the frog.

Mr.Doodles

31 Mar, 2015, 11:35 pm

I dissagree ^u0 I write everything based on the characters.

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