(continuing on,) Upon entering the woods, you notice a old, wooden sign, broken up and torn. On a closer look, it says, in a splattered, smudgy looking writing, "abandon all hope, those who enter the beast within." Thinking its just a prank set up by some dumb teenager, you continue into the woods. Journeying deeper and deeper into the woods, you notice that its starting to get foggy with each hurrying step you take. More and more you rush through the woods, the heavier the fog grows witn your fear, as the fog consumes your vision, leaving you blind. Fear eating on your inner most thoughts and sounds, you try to continue going, untill you start to hear a low growling behind you, coming closer to you. You start running blindly, hoping to find a way out. As you are running, you start feeling branches smacking and scratching all over your body, but as they repeatedly smack you, it slowly starts to feel like hands, human deformed hands.
(its still going, hold on to your pudding.)

(it still goes on.) As you are still running, your vision starts to slowly go red, blood red......and then......out of all the things you would do in a situation.......you start to laugh......a mad, blood curdling laugh......as your vision fades, you feel a liquid flowing from your head.......with the odd smell....of copper......and a voice, whispering from inside your mind, as scratchy as a chalkboard, repeating over, and over again as you fade into darkness, "suibam ,tsaeb eht eraweb ,uoy nihtiw ni si eh ,lla su nihtiw si eh" ............. [so, what did you think? is it good? does it suck? should i do more of this? feedback is important.]

it's good!!!