First Meeting 2: Kurtiss by HowlingZero
#Kurtiss (K) #orgFANG
K: Ah! Commander Raymund Gregor! I'm Kurtiss Beckstrom, at your service!
R: Right... Just "Ray" is fine. And what's with this "commander nonsense?We're the same rank.
K: Oh, well... I uh... Have great respect for your accomplishments in battle.
R: Hmm, well, I appreciate it, but we're comrades now, think of us as equals.
K: R-right.
R: Besides, if you're this tense on your time off, I'll be insane by the week's end... Nice PJs by the way, very cute.
K: Thank you, sir!
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19 Feb, 2015, 3:18 am
CONT.
R: *sigh* Alright, you can stop saluting now...
19 Feb, 2015, 3:22 am
I enjoy the continueing story. Is Ray gonna be a main character? He seems that way.
19 Feb, 2015, 3:29 am
Ah, right. I drew Kurtiss and Lang first, but I didn't have any ideas at the time, I was just throwing designs down. Now that I have a better idea of what I'm doing, I've decided to have Ray be the "main character." But I'm going to try and focus on every one and their interactions as a team. ("try" is the key word here, I know Lang is going to lose some attention because I'm not as good at drawing him, paired with his laid-back nature)
19 Feb, 2015, 3:55 am
Winter: Well... Uhm... I'm not entirely sure how I met him O-O
Me: Dude! Shut it! It was a nice story lol
19 Feb, 2015, 6:10 am
This is gold xD I like the character interaction already. I'm also very fond of Ray's attitude. It's a good thing he's not like "hurr hurr a girl's here in shorts *noseblud*" I'm not implying anything i'm just glad it's not the case. I do hope to see more of Lang though. He's my fav design-wise
19 Feb, 2015, 6:25 am
-InuStrider
Glad to see you agree. There's nothing se'xually awkward about this situation, it's just unprofessional. I don't want to write characters that are too anime-trope-y, I hate that so much.
I just kinda want 'em to feel natural.
19 Feb, 2015, 7:48 am
Yeah it's what annoys me about alot of anime the "YOU SAW ME IN LESS CLOTHING" while the dumb dude protag just takes it and doesnt explain. This does feel very natural for the setting so well done! As for the art, idk if it's just me but Kurtiss' right arm and left hand seem a little disproportionate (who am i to talk about proportions?) I'm looking forward to more comics from you in the future dude!
19 Feb, 2015, 7:50 am
*high-five*
But yeah, I screw up hand-proportions sometimes. :T
One of my many weaknesses.
19 Feb, 2015, 8:14 am
*awkwardly brofists the high five* I'd rather have problems with proportioms than only be able to only (sometimes) draw a hand facing you. Her head seems a little big but it doesn't look too huge or anything.