Awesome, his power sounds cool.
And I LOVE those gauntlets.
And yeah, sorry for the vagueness of the whole thing so far. I'm not much of a writer, heh...

Glad you like it! Regarding the color-scheme i didn't know how to future it so i'm just hoping it doesnt come off as Lang 2.0 I'm also hoping i didnt make the power too op. With the writing joke, it wasnt a complaint. i actually liked designing something with a limited knowledge. Hey if you're not much of a writer i'm free for brainstorm sessions xD

Hnmm, well I have ideas, but it's all a question of how much I can do with it.
I have to account for:
-How much I'm willing to draw
-What I have the ability to do
-How much people would care
-What I can do with Colors' limited capabilities
But hey, if you're willing to have me talk your ear off, I'm game.

Well, people would be patient if they like what they see. Colors IS limited but it's not to the point where this can't at least escalate. Regarding people caring, you already have alot of followers and that was based on art alone. I'm sure with a series they'd be very into what you have in store.
Be careful what you wish for dude, i talk people under the table! I'm always free so yeah talking about it is good at almost any time

Ha, thanks for that.
I can't help but worry that what I have is too derivative of stuff like Xenoblade, Aldnoah Zero and God Eater, but if you're ready for my essay, here it is.
So Earth was invaded by an alien group that was forced off its planet by a resource war. Of course, lucky for us humans, they come to colonize Earth. They attack and analyze the life of the planet and take on their forms to better adapt to their new environment. A lot of these enemies take the form of large, black, animals (wolves, birds, reptiles, some humanoid, etc) with heavy black-armoring. They're hard and silicon based making most conventional weaponry useless, which is why FANG uses high-energy beam weapons.
FANG is a government military group that took over after the attack. They manage resources and protect the people, but there's a corrupt side, so people respect, but also resent it. Many people live in scarcity or poverty, but by becoming a member of FANG, it's like knighthood, allowing you to rise

in social class and financial stability. Parents can join FANG for security and have their children genetically modified and trained as soldiers, giving them their "glowing eyes" abilities, which vary from person to person. Within FANG, your social standing is often based on that power, so people with better powers are more pampered and respected.
For example, Raymund's power isn't particularly useful, so he had start low and prove him self to rise in rank, while his sister (who I haven't drawn yet) has an amazing power which led her to a much better life.
FANG is a military group, but the soldiers aren't particularly organized, there's no uniforms and battles mainly consist of guerilla tactics. Their jobs are just to eliminate any enemies that approach areas of human civilization.

Phew.
AND THAT'S ALL I GOT.

Oh wow, that's quite the read xD Well the story sounds cool. The Social laws sound like that of Kill la Kill. The main idea sounds really good. It may sound like that same story people have heard i guess, but theres nothing thats 100 percent original these days. Heck the "glowing eyes" capabilities sound like the "soul arts" in my series because they're based on genetics. The story sounds really cool, and with those futuristic fire emblem-esque characters, i can see it going places, at the very least on here. I don't know exactly what plans/characters you plan to focus on but i can see it like an AoT type thing. From what i can see, it sounds really interesting. Something is asking though, how much of the earth is affected? How big is the threat that they need fang? Why are people still abusive of their power? In a big (or at least big in their area depending on how much of the planet they're attacking) situation, if all mankind needs to work together, then why would they NOT want to

protect their fellow man? I never got that in AoT either, but im guessing you have a reason. people are jerks, some pull through, some stay jerks. Overall, i give it an A. The story sounds cool (maybe done before, but not enough to be noticable or tired) The designs are cool. You got some cool futureistic gear, weapons, and powers. As well as a good reason for the organization to exist. Although, if it's a military organization, why no uniforms? or at least anything that would Show you're part of the organization? If it's a ragtag group of warriors, why be a governed organization? I guess my questions lie with the organization itself, because the rest is really good. I have some ideas but idk exactly how you'd want to plan it out. if you got kik or skype you can contact me on there. (because this touch screen sux as a keyboard imo)
kik:Inustrider
skype:Kalubainu
If you want to go deeper into discussion i'm mostly free (says im mostly free yet gone all day as of writing this) If you

want to hear my ideas let me know. Although give me an inch and i'll take a mile so think about it! xD Again, overall it sounds fantastic. personally i'd like to see more in the future, and maybe like some combat art or a teaser comic? I think that'd go well with your followers (says the guy with 130 less followers) Just plant the idea and let it take root! I'm sure it'll come out good. Good story, plus great art, equals perfect art combo!

Ha, Kill la Kill? I didn't even think of that, but you're so right.
So anyways, it's not as big as Attack on Titan's catastrophe. People were massacred and forced from their land, but there's multiple branches of survivors, grouped around populated, developed, industrialized nations (China, America, Germany, Egypt, etc). All these branches are part of FANG and are in contact, but most places beyond these areas are controlled by my still unnamed alien group. It's important to note that they can assimilate animals, but also copy human weaponry, so some are armed with guns, missiles, etc. So everyone's banded together against this and there's a pseudo-socialist system in play so that we can devote ourselves to protecting ourselves and fighting back. Of course, when resources are limited and demand is high, the rich higher ups take advantage of it. I think that's just a social constant.

As for the whole uniform thing, I'll be honest and say the reason for that is that I feel like I'd get bored of drawing them, and I didn't have a logo or emblem planned out. *cough*
But, to bring up Fire Emblem again, it's kinda like that. They dress in what they feel is comfortable for combat. FANG will provide combat clothes that are appropriate, but it's just not one set uniform. The creation of FANG was rushed, and they started a draft, so there were a lot of soldiers at first. So while there's some visual consistency between soldiers, there's no specific color or uniform defining rank, no set pieces of armor you're required to wear or anything like that.

Yeah i can see that happening. Gotta keep the 1 percent safe right? Honestly i was just waitung for you to admit getting bored, because if i was in your place i would too xD If you'd like i could design a symbol if it's cool with you. It's actually cool that you based it off of fire emblems "chiller uniforms" It gives people (like me) more freedom to make fanart. At least it's not like the whole world is taken over so theres an actual chance to defend.

If you want to try designing an emblem, go for it man. God knows I don't have any ideas.
I'm working on some enemy designs right now too, but I'm not particularly good at drawing things that aren't human so we'll see how that turns out, heh...

I think it came out awesomely!

I have like 2 ideas for the emblem. One's like a sabretooth tiger roaring while it's fangs have a plasma look that makes an X. The other is still in progress