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Also, I'm changing the "Environmental Golems" to "Environmental Guardians".
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30 Jan, 2015, 12:29 am
The next day, we see the citizens of Wacknerpia behind energy beam bars. They were clearly in despair...
OS Jouigi: All cozy in there, furball? >:)
Jowiz: This isn't over, OS...Jouigi oughta put you back in the spirit world that you came from.
OS Jouigi: Oh will he? Because I have something planned for that goodie two-paws, and it won't be pretty...for him! I'll be seeing you later.
Obsession Shadow leaves the prison room.
30 Jan, 2015, 12:40 am
Just then, T-Bone breaks down the wall, and with him was Plugino and BonBon!
Plugino: We have come to save you, every one of you!
NinShay: Oh, thank goodness!
J450-N: Salvation has appeared!
BonBon turns off the energy beam cells with the control system. It's all thanks to her knowledge of technology she obtained since she became a cyborg.
Jowiz: Thank you all. I knew you'd come. Where's the rest of the group?
BonBon: They're on their way to OS's throne room.
Jowiz: Oh dear...You should tell them to be careful. OS told me that his throne room is extremely hazordous and that it contains many traps and guards.
30 Jan, 2015, 12:45 am
Plugino: Don't worry, they'll be fine. Now let's head for the main control room so we can de-hypnotize all the eggons.
T-Bone: (!) :D
So everyone snuck their way to the main control room; only to find that there's guards protecting the enterance.
30 Jan, 2015, 12:54 am
T-Bone walks casually past the guards to be noticed.
BonBon: (whispers)T-Bone, what are you doing?!
Eggon Guard: Hey! Get back here!!
The two guards leave their position to chase T-Bone.
Plugino: Now's our chance. Let's go.
The group goes in the entance and find another door. There had to be a passcode entered. However, BonBon straight up hacks it and the door opens. She then begins operating the system.
BonBon: Too easy. B)
30 Jan, 2015, 12:57 am
Meanwhile in Jouigi's house, Breeca still has a cold while Mika takes care of her. Breeca then sneezes again; but this time, snow came out and she started to feel a little better.
30 Jan, 2015, 1:07 am
Jouigi, Paul, DJay, Matrix, and Wendy finally make it to the throne room where they see OS missing. He then appears out of a shadow-y corner slowly clapping.
OS: Very nice. You've managed to come right into...MY TRAP!!
OS pushes a but.ton that makes a cage fall down. But the group dodges it by making a single step forward.
OS Jouigi: Oh COME ON! Do you have any idea how much that costs?
Jouigi: Enough games, OS. We brought your mother. Are you gonna give in? ...or do we have to make you give in?
OS Jouigi: I have something to show you first!
OS reveals a giant machine.
30 Jan, 2015, 1:14 am
OS Jouigi: You see, using this doohickey, I no longer need the Environmental Guardian to control. I now have access to all the powers of wizards, aliens, ninjas, and robots! But not the cowboys or pirates because they don't have any powers; just weapons.
Jouigi: I'm warning you OS...We can do this the easy way or the hard way.
OS orders the nearby eggon to flip the switch of the machine as he puts the helmet on his head.
OS Jouigi: Hard way... >:)
The machine is powered up and OS is in pain at first but then laughs maniacally. Will Jouigi be able to face off against OS this time?! Find out in the next chapter. Sorry! dB
30 Jan, 2015, 1:15 am
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30 Jan, 2015, 1:45 am
Thanks for giving NinShay a line! This story is very exciting! cant wait for the next part!
30 Jan, 2015, 1:46 am
also, do you ever plan on hosting another Wackrpia (typo?) one day? its been a while since the last one.
30 Jan, 2015, 2:04 pm
Amazing. :) It's got an awesome storyline so far.
30 Jan, 2015, 5:26 pm
This is soo awesome! Has every1 forgot about Betty?
31 Jan, 2015, 4:18 am
Ah man! This is getting really good! I can't for more of Jouigi: the Movie! 8 )