It starts off with everyone over the age of 16 dieing. The grass permanently turns red, red from the blood of the deceased, it suddenly goes dark and flies appear. One mysterious lone figyre wanders into this strange world. Caine S
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05 Jul, 2012, 6:39 pm
Continued...Caine Soren. He is fourteen. He decides to look after all the children and be responsible for any incidents - basically he becomes in charge.
10 Jul, 2012, 12:05 pm
again interesting writing, do you write them? if not where's it from. i'm writing my own story not too far on only on page 14, luno was always a charactor i wrote about in this book ecsept he was only called it, he or the dog.
10 Jul, 2012, 4:34 pm
I am writing a story! It's not about this though. It's about the fact that life is a game. Everyone who turns 14 has to go to the real world - the game. A girl does and she dies at the end. That is stage two of the game, when you die.
11 Jul, 2012, 3:46 am
your storys sound quite dark, i love the occasinal dark story, i think mine's more adventure
11 Jul, 2012, 4:15 pm
Cool!