GN here again lol 4th panel this time. I think Cyrus should be saying "great!(or something like that)and then "I can catch him there!" or "I'll catch him there! Then,I will give him a test to make sure he's the real deal!" You're comic is very intesesting though. If you don't want my critisism/edits,I'll stop. I'm not being mean/rude though.
Well, i don't mind critism, but you should know that the reason the grammer is off is because there isnt enough space in the talk bubbles to look good. If i did fit it in there which i tried to do, then you wouldn't be able to read it because the text would be too small. So know that I'm aware of the mistakes and i know you're not being rude, but i made the grammar mistakes so it's readable if that makes sense
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23 Jan, 2015, 5:29 am
GN here again lol 4th panel this time. I think Cyrus should be saying "great!(or something like that)and then "I can catch him there!"
or "I'll catch him there! Then,I will give him a test to make sure he's the real deal!"
You're comic is very intesesting though. If you don't want my critisism/edits,I'll stop. I'm not being mean/rude though.
23 Jan, 2015, 7:08 am
Well, i don't mind critism, but you should know that the reason the grammer is off is because there isnt enough space in the talk bubbles to look good. If i did fit it in there which i tried to do, then you wouldn't be able to read it because the text would be too small. So know that I'm aware of the mistakes and i know you're not being rude, but i made the grammar mistakes so it's readable if that makes sense