Cyrus' Night Part 6 by Inu-Strider

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#NewEmber #CyrusI #comic

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
22 Jan, 2015, 10:22 pm
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Solara14

23 Jan, 2015, 5:29 am

GN here again lol 4th panel this time. I think Cyrus should be saying "great!(or something like that)and then "I can catch him there!"
or "I'll catch him there! Then,I will give him a test to make sure he's the real deal!"
You're comic is very intesesting though. If you don't want my critisism/edits,I'll stop. I'm not being mean/rude though.

Inu-Strider

23 Jan, 2015, 7:08 am

Well, i don't mind critism, but you should know that the reason the grammer is off is because there isnt enough space in the talk bubbles to look good. If i did fit it in there which i tried to do, then you wouldn't be able to read it because the text would be too small. So know that I'm aware of the mistakes and i know you're not being rude, but i made the grammar mistakes so it's readable if that makes sense

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