so my art... by foulbone

can someone anyone critique me? ive been doing traditional art and it sucks. Also any tips for motivation? thnx. #wip

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
17 Jan, 2015, 2:49 am
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Pink-Espeon

17 Jan, 2015, 3:17 am

I'd say the best thing to practice is blending the shading. It looks incomplete and draws away from the beauty it could have

Pink-Espeon

17 Jan, 2015, 3:18 am

also, practice coloring in the lines, it was a small detail i noticed in other paintings

foulbone

17 Jan, 2015, 5:23 am

ok! thank you!

Viivi

17 Jan, 2015, 10:02 am

You could clean your lineart just a bit (like stray edges/lines) and work on the shading; so it looks more gradient c: And if you're doing the one layer challenge, it means you have to do absolutely everything on a single layer, including coloring on top of the base and lineart. Same with the BG too.

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