I'm not good at drawing bodies so, can someone harshly critique this, please?
Thanks.
Drawn to:
Brendan's Death Song - Red Hot Chili Peppers
You're Gonna Go Far, Kid - The Offspring
Do I Wanna Know - Arctic Monkeys
From Heads Unworthy - Rise Against
Walking Disaster - Sum 41
#vent #purple #dark #practice #converse #JadedSky
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Comments
14 Jan, 2015, 2:01 am
(you asked for it)
First off, this just looks backwards, try right leg raised, legs kind of more out in front.
Hands and feet are disproportionate, try a *little* bit bigger. Other than that, it looks good, and its shows that you put alot of work into it.
14 Jan, 2015, 2:23 am
looks pretty awesome c:
the only things i see are the thighs are really long to me? thatsalltho
14 Jan, 2015, 2:45 am
re: C:
Hnng
thx Jade, you'll get there. Trustme, jjuuust practicepracticepractice c:
14 Jan, 2015, 6:04 am
You are welcome. To be honest, we're kinda in the same boat, I just have an eye for porportions (or so I tell myself)
14 Jan, 2015, 10:56 am
As you already know, I'm not the best at bodies and so on but what I am noticing is that the thighs are a little too long, the hands and feet are a tad too small, and that back leg could use a little more shape to it. Also, one leg is longer than the other. Buuuuut (bu.tt) this does show you're getting a lot better. Just keep practicing, cool cat. c:
Re: THANKS U FRIEND
U DIDNT KNOW THERE WAS
M U F F I N M I X??? ohmygod
ITS NEAR THE BOX CAKE MIX IN THE STORE SOMETIMES ITS IN PACKAGES (likeplasticpouches) OR BOXES. THAT STUFF.
I love that honey bunches of oats, yo. with the granola and stuff mmm hell yea boii
14 Jan, 2015, 10:56 am
*IFORGOTTOADDTHIS*
whats ur favorite cereal bruh
14 Jan, 2015, 11:13 pm
i think its awesome ^w^
15 Jan, 2015, 2:34 am
I think this is actually pretty good, the hands and feet are a bit small but it goes perfectly with your art style
15 Jan, 2015, 9:50 am
Re: no it isnt shhhh
Yeeaahhh, I do that all the time. Just as I'm finishing it up, I notice 50 million flaws.
itsokaybutdolook
i've never been a fan of froot loops idk why
i do like fruity pebbles tho holy a.ss theyre good