by JadedSky

I'm not good at drawing bodies so, can someone harshly critique this, please?
Thanks.

Drawn to:
Brendan's Death Song - Red Hot Chili Peppers
You're Gonna Go Far, Kid - The Offspring
Do I Wanna Know - Arctic Monkeys
From Heads Unworthy - Rise Against
Walking Disaster - Sum 41

#vent #purple #dark #practice #converse #JadedSky

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
13 Jan, 2015, 6:15 pm
02:53

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Fisks

14 Jan, 2015, 2:01 am

(you asked for it)
First off, this just looks backwards, try right leg raised, legs kind of more out in front.
Hands and feet are disproportionate, try a *little* bit bigger. Other than that, it looks good, and its shows that you put alot of work into it.

Infinite_Thoughts

14 Jan, 2015, 2:23 am

looks pretty awesome c:

the only things i see are the thighs are really long to me? thatsalltho

Infinite_Thoughts

14 Jan, 2015, 2:45 am

re: C:

Hnng

thx Jade, you'll get there. Trustme, jjuuust practicepracticepractice c:

Fisks

14 Jan, 2015, 6:04 am

You are welcome. To be honest, we're kinda in the same boat, I just have an eye for porportions (or so I tell myself)

ChemicalKid

14 Jan, 2015, 10:56 am

As you already know, I'm not the best at bodies and so on but what I am noticing is that the thighs are a little too long, the hands and feet are a tad too small, and that back leg could use a little more shape to it. Also, one leg is longer than the other. Buuuuut (bu.tt) this does show you're getting a lot better. Just keep practicing, cool cat. c:

Re: THANKS U FRIEND

U DIDNT KNOW THERE WAS
M U F F I N M I X??? ohmygod
ITS NEAR THE BOX CAKE MIX IN THE STORE SOMETIMES ITS IN PACKAGES (likeplasticpouches) OR BOXES. THAT STUFF.

I love that honey bunches of oats, yo. with the granola and stuff mmm hell yea boii

ChemicalKid

14 Jan, 2015, 10:56 am

*IFORGOTTOADDTHIS*
whats ur favorite cereal bruh

Colourful_Tears

14 Jan, 2015, 11:13 pm

i think its awesome ^w^

ShadowWaffle

15 Jan, 2015, 2:34 am

I think this is actually pretty good, the hands and feet are a bit small but it goes perfectly with your art style

ChemicalKid

15 Jan, 2015, 9:50 am

Re: no it isnt shhhh

Yeeaahhh, I do that all the time. Just as I'm finishing it up, I notice 50 million flaws.
itsokaybutdolook

i've never been a fan of froot loops idk why

i do like fruity pebbles tho holy a.ss theyre good

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