#RainbowInCloudySky (Rainbow) was born in the tribe of endless night with her littermate #LeafThatIsFalling (Leaf). Her mother was Voice wich sounds like wind (Voice). But as Rainbow and Leaf were four moons old, Voice had to go to the four clans, MossClan, FogClan, SandClan and SnowClan, because her mother was there, Rainbows Grandma. Her name was Thundertail. She was a medecine cat, so she couldn´t have kits, so she went to the tribe to leave with two of her kits. She left Voice there, ´cause she was to weak to go on such a big journey. It broke her heart, but she had to. As Rainbow and Leaf were playing with #StoneThatIsRolling (Stone) , they went outside for going hunting, even if they just were kits. The clan starving slowly, ´cause a big flood destroyed the territory, no prey came anymore. Then they suddenly saw #FireWichIsBurning (Fire) and #Nightteller , the old teller she-cat of the tribe. Rainbow and the others promised to catch much, when they finally are apprentices.

Then, a few moons later, Rainbow, Leaf and Stone were apprentices, suddenly her mother came back. But not alone. The whole clans came with her. Their was a big flood too. And all of the tribe cats knew, they had to go away with them, because a few cats died of hunger. But Rainbow had other problems. She fell in love. With stone. But she was much too shy to say it. Then they went on the big journey for finding a new home. Rainbow made friend with Crowfrost, a she-cat who was part of a prophecy. But then, Rainbow heard something. This prophecy. "If the crow flies throug the two rainbows, they will win the battle and the blood will swim away." And the two rainbows meant Rainbow and Rainbowstripe, Crowfrosts mate. And the blood meant Rainbowstripes brother, Bloodclaw. He was a terrible tom (male cat xD). He always betrayed the clan. His mother was dead, fell down a cliff, because she didn´t want to get Sundarkness help, Crowfrosts mother. Then they found the home.

It was wonderful. And the clans and the tribe decided, that they will live together, in peace. So they built two camps. One for the queens and elders, where a lot of medicine-cats were and one with warriors and apprentices. Crowfrost wanted to tell Rainbowstripe that she was expecting his kits, so they went out into the territory. But they didn´t come back. Cerealstar, the leader of old MossClan (Rainbowstripe was his deputy) told Rainbow, that she should find them. The grey cat was lucky, she knew that the both cats went to the waterfall cage. But as Rainbow arrived... she found them... laying ln the ground, bleeding extremly bad. And then, somebody attacked her. It was Bloodclaw. They fought long, Rainbow lost an ear, an eye and got many scars. But she knew, she had to survive. For Rainbowstripe, Crowfrost, their kits and the cats ! So she fought bravely. As she almost was unconcious, she packed Bloodclaw with her jaw and threw him into the river, he sank down and Rainbow was sure,

Geschichte schon zuende? =) Darf ich dann mein Fazit abgeben? nwn

SuperYoshi, die Geschichte ist noch net zu Ende ! xD

Rainbow was sure, that he was dead. Then she fell down to the ground, couldn´t see and couldn´t hear anything. As she woke up, she saw Stone. He was totally happy about she woke up. She nearly died, meant Sundarkness and Thundertail. Stone promised to love her always, he said, Rainbow is still the prettiest cat for him, even of her scars and the destroyed face.
Rainbow only discovered slowly, but then she was okay. As she went out of the camp for going on a walk, she saw Stone. And Leaf, her sister ! She was so shocked and ran to home and slept. Then somebody woke her up (now you also could read #Adioflcomics xD). It was stone and he said: "Wake up my darling." But Rainbow shouted at him, that he betrayed her with her OWN sister and ran away, crying. Then, suddenly there was a lion. She gave Rainbow a necklace. She should search a human, because the world was near to destroy itself. Rainbow accepted the challenge, knew it was the

only chance to save everybody. But then, she suddenly heard a voice. A tom walked out of a bush. Rainbow had to say, she couldn´t forget him and there she knew, she fell in love with him, about one year ago. It was Bloodclaw. Her head said, it waa wrong to love him, but her heart said, it was right. She didn´t know what to do. But... then he told her, that he love her too, even if she almost killed him. But what happened then ? ;D That´s another story ! ´`w´`

Poor Raimbow. :´(
This is a fantastic story! nwn
You´re an amazing writter!

Band 2 war toll *v*
Bei mir ist die Reihnfolge fast genau so bloß Break ist bei mir auf Platz 3 :3

-Fazit-
Rechtschreibfehler/Grammatik: Hab bloß wenige Fehler entdeckt,aber im Großen und Ganzen alles von der Grammatik her richtig und selbst ich als realtiver Englisch-Noob hab alles verstanden. =D
Story: Ziemlich gut als Fanstory,aber für richtige Fans wahrscheinlich vertrauter und besser.
*KUCHEN* OWO

Aber die Story ist geil *o*
Du könntest Bücher schreiben *,*

In Ordnung,ich hol mir schnell Erdbeertorte dann öffne ich in 10 min. Raum. :)

Hab leider nur die Hälfte vom ersten Band gelesen.
*Erdbeertorte durch Bildschirm reich* nun

Danke,Englisch ist eigentlich ziemlich ok,das einzige,was ich daran nicht mag,sind diese Hörverständnisteile.. -w-"
Ach ja,mir ist noch ein Kritikpunkt an der Story eingefallen: Die vielen Hashtaggs. xD Die reißen aus der Atmosphäre raus.

Re: That´s spooky. xD

Re2: You are very strong girl. :´)
Happy year in Garmany too! xD