"In a nearly past..."

"Our story started in a little village,here,there wasn´t any technology,because they used the magic.One of the residents was Shail,he was a wizard.He used to live here with his wife,and his four little children."

"One morning,the villagers woke up with a very bad sourprise...the sea covered a half of the village.The people started to be confused,they always lived near the sea,and this never happened before."

"The wizards had to use their magic at same time for recover the normal state of the sea.Something was going wrong there..."

"The villagers started to say that the wizards were making the sea inestability,and they started to hate the wizards."

"Shail best friend was Henrry,he was one of the most powerfull wizards of the village.Both started to thinking about how to solve the problem.After searching in lots of books and ancient texts,Shail found out maybe it´d be caused by someone that stoled the power of one of the magic spheres: the sea sphere." Continue

"After a long search,they found the sphere.It was black instead of blue.Shail and Henry arrived to the village and they told the villager about how to solve the problem."

"They had to try to recover the magic sphere power,all the wizards used their power at same time,but it didn´t work."

"Shail took the sphere and he decided to do something very sad:

-Kids,-he called his children-come here please...

When the kids come next to him,he used the magic sphere´s minimun power to transform his kids.They turn water creature hybrids,with a special power each one,Jak,obtain the one of the equilibrium of the seas,and his sisters the ones of the beachs,seas and most dark submarine places.They forgot everything too.So they started to do their job protect the oceans.They just go like...nothing happened."

"Shail turns back,and he said that that was the only possible solution...then he started to cry with his wife."

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"Time later,Líse and Jak were feeding the sharks (something normal for them).Jak couldn´t control the sharks,so he only could watch.Suddenly,a very dangerous shark appeared and he started to follow Jak.Jak scared a lot and he swim so much as he can for escape.Líse could calm the shark in the last second."

"After that day,Jak started to dislike the water,he felt more confortable on earth.So his sisters used to find him thinking on the beach."

"Untill one day...but that´s another story."

The end! 9w6

I hope you liked it! nwn

Poor wizard.:'l

very cool =D

Cool ! *-*
Jaks Father really looks a bit like Jak ! xD
I discovered a few wrong things in the story, but this isn´t sooooooooo much ! ´`w´`

OuO Wow! This story was quite interesting, Brisa! I felt sorry for Shail's kids though... ;'O