Teiden Carina (Algola) by Guppin

I've been practicing drawing people more, so I decided to draw Teiden again to see how much I've improved. Honestly, does this look good? Is there anything I should fix?

Some dialogue (Teiden and Agrime are discussing what she did in Leonbourne):

T: I don't deserve to live this selfish existence.
T: Every second I still breathe is a second my friends are in danger.
A: Do'n't sa'y tha't.
T: Agrime, I'm a monster!
A: No' yo'u're' no't.
A: Mo'nste'rs ca'n't fe'e'l.

#WIP #Guppin #TeidenCarina

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
30 Nov, 2014, 6:06 pm
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toatsMergoats

30 Nov, 2014, 6:44 pm

yes you have improved
and btw
practice makes perfect :o)

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