"Stranded" pt 1 "Cruise" by headJoJogamer

At last, my sonic story "Stranded" part one has come! plz note this is sort of a Sonic X episode. If u decide u dont like it comment, i will delete all storys i uploaded so far & scrap one im working on if all i get is negative reviews. Also, do not comment until AFTER the part end. #Sonic #jojogamerstory #OCallowed #SonicStranded

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23 Nov, 2014, 2:51 pm
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headJoJogamer

23 Nov, 2014, 2:55 pm

Sonic: Do we HAVE to go on this cruise?" Amy: come on, its been FOREVER since we had a vacation! Sonic: *mumbles* This isnt much of a vacation for me... Chris: The reviews say they have EVERYTHING! A restaurant, a pool, high quality rooms... Sonic: Okay, okay...lets just go & get this over with... Amy: come on sonic, it'll be fun!

headJoJogamer

23 Nov, 2014, 2:57 pm

As they all got on the cruise ship, Sonic already had a bad feeling. Hours later, everyone was having the time of their lives...everyone but sonic.

headJoJogamer

23 Nov, 2014, 3:01 pm

Sonic: How long do i have to be stuck here? Chris: A week. Sonic: UGH! *falls to floor* Chris: Come on Sonic, go have fun with everyone else! I think Tails & Knuckles are at the restaurant...you DO know they have chili dogs right? Sonic *gets of floor* WHAT?! *zooms away* WOO HOO!!!

headJoJogamer

23 Nov, 2014, 3:04 pm

For a day, the ship quietly and smoothly ran along the sea, and Sonic still hasnt needed to go on the deck. However, after that nice day, the ship ran into a horrible storm, which was swinging and swaying the ship.

headJoJogamer

23 Nov, 2014, 3:06 pm

Sonic: See?! I told you we shouldnt have gone on this cruise!! Amy: At least im not hanging onto the railing of my bunk scared. Sonic: What? *takes hands of railing* i-im not!

headJoJogamer

23 Nov, 2014, 3:07 pm

Everyone just thought they ran into a storm, ignoring Sonic. But he was right, something strange was going to happen...

headJoJogamer

23 Nov, 2014, 3:08 pm

Part 1 end

headJoJogamer

23 Nov, 2014, 3:10 pm

i mean, of COURSE something weird has to happen! ;)

headJoJogamer

23 Nov, 2014, 7:29 pm

i usally make another part every saturday and sunday, but i may make it sooner if i get bored

headJoJogamer

23 Nov, 2014, 8:20 pm

btw, thnx for the positive reveiw, could u help more people notice this?

asxcjkbc

28 Nov, 2014, 2:22 am

On the last picture you said an OC could be in it. Is it okay if you could put me in the story? #humansammy

headJoJogamer

01 Dec, 2014, 11:22 pm

ill see what i can do! :)

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