Let's take it from the top:
-The artstyle is beyond outdated
-Storyline is vague
-awfully short
-lack of text and suspense
This won't affect AstroClass N, though. There are more reasons to redo it, therefore, i may just to clarify the point, there's not hook in the story if the point is misunderstood...!
:l
Edit: To clarify, i just wanna start fresh. T'is all.
The Colors! Gallery moderators will look at it as soon as possible.
Comments
22 Nov, 2014, 8:05 pm
see desc...?
"le bored le bored le bored" :P?
well if you're gonna restart, don't delete the others, they show progress :]
22 Nov, 2014, 9:53 pm
^Re: I won't. I can't delete 'em cause i also can't put 'em anywhere else.
:P
24 Nov, 2014, 5:06 am
re: yeah yada yada yada thx rada rada rada how are you feeling? :0 get some rest ok? ok. uvu
24 Nov, 2014, 11:54 pm
ah ok :] (phew -o-)
25 Nov, 2014, 8:54 pm
Re: Thanks. Yeah, sorry about the last minute deal. I was going to give about a week's notice (since I publish one pic a week, that would've made it easier) but I guess it came a bit faster than I thought. I didn't even think about it until last Saturday, so I guess I even caught myself off guard with that one!
25 Nov, 2014, 8:56 pm
You have some series too?
I should check 'em out sometime! (Probably when the revision is done, yes?)
25 Nov, 2014, 10:44 pm
Ok.
26 Nov, 2014, 9:18 pm
Lol thanks bro! ^^
Goodra says thank you, too XD
27 Nov, 2014, 7:57 am
0-o?
27 Nov, 2014, 10:53 pm
oh yeah i get that now but ya put a comma after it so i thought you had more to say :P
28 Nov, 2014, 12:47 am
Re: Alright, I will (on both topics)
Hey, I just had a thought....wanna be buddies?