Prologue by PheoExperiment

Erm, I decided to post my series from a notebook >> Sorry TR, you can read it here.
#TQGD

Dont comment until it says -end-
Also, comics eventually will be made.
This story takes place on my imaginary planet, Archanid-Mauter (Terka was its orig name but TR has that region c:) and the characters are not actually humans but like furries.. So enjoy

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
09 Nov, 2014, 7:48 pm
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PheoExperiment

09 Nov, 2014, 8:03 pm

The wind was howling as the acid rain poured down, threatening to flood the land. The acid drops seared her skin and left red trails as they dripped down her sensitive skin. She looked down at the blee.ding body and shed a single tear, barely noticeable in the turrent of rain. A nameless face she had ki.lled, her mission completed but it tore her apart. Another piece of her sanity srtipped away. "Commander! We need to get moving!" Her two squad members stood by her sides, under the acid rain as the Imperial Guards rushed in. She nodded and they disappeared into the shadows. Back at the main camp, they tended to their injuries and burns. Red streaks ran down their skin but it didnt seem to bother any of the members. News spread of the dead heir and immediately the Commander was congratulated, 'Ki.ll the heir and choke them, cut off their resources until they feel our prescence!' One Mutineer would yell, uplifting spirits. Truth be rold, the Commander felt as if she had failed. -cont-

PheoExperiment

09 Nov, 2014, 8:13 pm

Another stain on my hands, she thought to herself. "How would we escape execution if we were caught?" She accidentally mumbled outloud. Her comrade smiled, seeming to have understood she looked outside the tent flap. "The rain has long stopped, our Goddesses arent angry any longer." Was all she said before another comrade tackled the insightful one. "Haha, Aravnid! How are you still able to look at the bright side of things? Babe--" Aravnid elbowed the intruder in the gut and snarled, "Kiara, we ARENT dating you idiot!" She keeled over and the Commander snickered. Kiara was such a hopeless woman. The hurt woman shook it off and grinned, "youre just in denial." Aravnid crossed her arms and kicked Kiara back down and marched out of the tent. Kiara followed suit, seeming to have recovered, and was apologizing profusedly. The commander chuckled and sat down on her cot, she tried to remember the Prince's last words... Memory flickered and she strained hard. "I-its okay, my life..." -cont-

PheoExperiment

09 Nov, 2014, 8:15 pm

"-cough- was.. was.." The Prince had died then, what had he meant to say? The Commander shook her head and realized the Prince had died with a smile... Did that mean he had sacraficed himself for the Resistance? -end-

xXLacklusterLoserXx

09 Nov, 2014, 8:27 pm

Yus, finally! :D
Lemme just finish mine and I'll come back and read this! (You just had to post when I did, didn't you? :p)

xXLacklusterLoserXx

09 Nov, 2014, 9:04 pm

XD Aaaaah, yes yes a million times yes! I need more of this drug! XD

xXLacklusterLoserXx

09 Nov, 2014, 9:05 pm

And by your tags I mean #CXart and #CXbest :D
It looks like they have little smilies at the front, and it always makes me smile CX

xXLacklusterLoserXx

09 Nov, 2014, 9:13 pm

It's like when I see troublingrain in lower case
I always read Troublin Grain XD

And dude shush up, I love your story! :D Mine's all over the place, it just looks decent cuz it's long CX

xXLacklusterLoserXx

09 Nov, 2014, 9:24 pm

Yes, very much so ewe

Oh, is this a competition? Fish plz, I just hit a time warp. te-ot
Silly details like what time these were posted means nothing when you smack a time warp as hard as I have

xXLacklusterLoserXx

09 Nov, 2014, 9:42 pm

No! TroublinGrain must only be harvested when fresh potatoelings are hatched- by the light of the first blo0d moon! D:

xXLacklusterLoserXx

09 Nov, 2014, 10:09 pm

But that day is not today >:D
I shall live on, amongst the unhatched potato eggs

xXLacklusterLoserXx

09 Nov, 2014, 10:43 pm

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Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!
Save me putatay eggs!

xXLacklusterLoserXx

09 Nov, 2014, 10:52 pm

-le gasp-
putatay betrayed me? tO: t wuuuuuuut

xXLacklusterLoserXx

09 Nov, 2014, 11:19 pm

XD
Hey I know you don't get much wifi so when are you gonna post the next of this?
I need it D:

xXLacklusterLoserXx

09 Nov, 2014, 11:31 pm

:D

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