Prologue by TFmel
prologue to my new story Hail To The King
guys please let me know what you think of this, you wouldn't believe how much motivation i get from feedback
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#minecraft #notch #herobrine #HTTK
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27 Oct, 2014, 6:20 pm
The crowd was vast. It took over every inch of the Square. On any other day, colourful stalls selling various amounts of items would litter the market place. But not today. Every pair of eyes was fixed on the balcony that jutted out from the massive, towering castle. And on it, stood Notch.
Before he addressed the crowd, he removed the solid gold crown from his head. Sunlight bounced around inside the jewels engraved in the gold that equally glistened in the light. Notch held it out before his people, who joined in with the words he spoke.
"Long live the king! Long live the people! Long live Aether-Light!"
However, as Notch himself said these words, he began to fade away.
Cheering turned to confused murmurs and gasps.
27 Oct, 2014, 6:21 pm
Then, as if someone had flicked a switch, Notch was replaced by another man. The sky turned dark almost instantly. Threatening rumbles of thunder rolled through the clouds while lightning lashed out like snakes' tongues. The entire Square had silenced itself as it watched the balcony with wide eyes.
The man, who was dressed in the royal robes and crown Notch had been wearing just moments ago, turned to face the crowd.
Quick, sharp gasps escaped the mouths of a few, others just stared in disbelief. Piercing white eyes returned their gaze.
"Long live the king? Hmhm, gladly" Herobrine said in a sinister tone.
Another crash of thunder erupted from above. It seemed to shake the ground. Taking things a step further, a bolt of lightning struck down into the Square, blinding anyone who saw it. Screams and shouts cried out from all around, and then nothing.
Everything went black.
27 Oct, 2014, 7:52 pm
no seriously. feedback's awesome
27 Oct, 2014, 8:18 pm
FEEEDBAAAAAAAAACK!!!
I love it!
27 Oct, 2014, 8:58 pm
Another story? . -.
27 Oct, 2014, 10:02 pm
@wk
thanks =D
@madi
yep
28 Oct, 2014, 12:16 am
awesome! ^u^
28 Oct, 2014, 12:22 am
thanks Viv!
28 Oct, 2014, 12:38 am
Wow...
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WELL LET THE STORY BEGEN!!!!
28 Oct, 2014, 12:41 am
Klick: you...you...you moron of a cosin...
28 Oct, 2014, 1:14 am
i like it!,please make this happen! :]
28 Oct, 2014, 3:43 am
thanks md =)
31 Oct, 2014, 8:40 pm
Muffin: Daaaad! >:( Where's Uncle Notch, huh?
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MY GAWD I'VE JUST REALISED NOTCH IS MUFFIN'S UNCLE
also this is awesome!
Muffin: Yeah, what's Dad gonna do this time?