Need Help!!! (Kind of Back) by Lillie-Senpai

Why I haven't been on well I'll tell if you ask. What I really need is some peeps to help me make my first creepy pasta story. And while were at it, might as well make this a Chat Room. :3

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
24 Oct, 2014, 10:20 pm
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TFmel

24 Oct, 2014, 10:23 pm

welcome back! :D "hugs" where've you been?
writing a cp is like any other kind of story. you need
-a plot
-characters
-time and setting

read others to get ideas

Lillie-Senpai

24 Oct, 2014, 10:27 pm

Hello! ^-^ Hugs back. Yeah I know, but I'm not sure on a few things. One moment while I type question/questions.

Lillie-Senpai

24 Oct, 2014, 10:44 pm

Infoe on my creepy pasta o.c. Name: Soul's Wrath
#0 The Wrath of Souls
Nickname: Soulcage
He's kind of hard to describe and so I may draw him here. But I'll try. ^^
He's made of different materials and things because Shiro created him. He wears a cute innocennt mask, but the face underneath is definitely not innocennt. There's a pair of two white wolf eyes and red scars. His face is all black. He has eyes on his body. Two on the soulders, two on the hips and two smaller ones within the tail. These eyes are twisted or insane and they do have a conscious. The end of the tail is a huge blade like thing. His right arm is a metal pincher and the back is made out of metal as well. These three parts; end of tail, pincher and back are all made of metal/cyborg tech. His left hand has three claws and crazy markings along the arm. His right foot has three claws and crazy markings along the leg. His left foot has four claws and crazy markings along the leg. Crazy markings- meaning all different.

Lillie-Senpai

24 Oct, 2014, 10:48 pm

Phew that was alot of typing! Okay the questions! (>'W')^

Other then Shiro and Soulcage who else could fit into the story?

*This is an event that happened with Shiro in the past.

TFmel

24 Oct, 2014, 10:57 pm

ok, um, maybe people he worked along with? or people who might be interested in his research, prehaps not in a good way if you want a bit of action

Lillie-Senpai

24 Oct, 2014, 11:03 pm

Hmmm okay... Like maybe Nightmare! :D Hmm... I guess Okami would be working with him. And I guess I'll make other lab partners including victims.

TFmel

24 Oct, 2014, 11:04 pm

yeah that sounds good ^-^-b

Lillie-Senpai

24 Oct, 2014, 11:07 pm

I picked a few settings; City, abounded city, lab, forest and abounded house.

TFmel

24 Oct, 2014, 11:11 pm

ok =) so now you just need a plot. sometimes making the beginning, then the ending is easier because you know what you want to hapoen so it's easier making the middle. try to have suspense and tension to keep it interesting, but make sure to conclude it unless you plan a sequel

Lillie-Senpai

24 Oct, 2014, 11:38 pm

Okay thank you! :D

TFmel

25 Oct, 2014, 12:30 am

no prob ^-^-b

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