Still Alive, part 1. by Scootaloo

Luna was tired. She felt like she had no more energy. She just wanted to shut down. Just for today. She closed her eyes. Forever. -next day- "PRINCESS LUNA, I COMMAND YOU TO WAKE UP!" Screamed Celestia. "Oh, Luna, what's wrong?" The majestic white pony put her hoof on the small blue pony. "Guards... SHE'S NOT BREATHING!" Zecora rushed into the room. "I felt a terrible disater. I ran to here faster. What's wrong, princess? I felt your distress!" said the rhyming zebra. "LUNA IS DEAD!"

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24 Jun, 2012, 12:05 am
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thelastcommando

24 Jun, 2012, 12:23 am

*Reads the story title* Darnit, now I have GLaDOS singing stuck in my head...

Scootaloo

24 Jun, 2012, 12:48 pm

Zecora protested, "Yes, I can do it, but there is a catch, someone's life I must snatc.h!" "I DON'T CARE!" boomed the alicorn. "Okay, filly. You may get chilly." The zebra threw the winged pegasus into a freezer. "Horn of dead," the lifeless body of Luna's horn was messily torn off. "Wings of lost." The deranged zebra hacksawed off Luna's wings. A muffled scream of terror came from the freezer with Celestia in it. "Now, don't scream. This potion needs you two as a team. Ahem, eyes of Luna," The psychopathic zebra used a knife to dislocate the alicorn's eyes, and one of the guards started throwing up all over the place. "Her sister's spleen," Zecora walked over to the freezer, and took a surgical instrument, cut off part of her flank, and returned with a bloody organ. "Turn this loved one back, 13!" Luna rose. Her broken horn was replaced by black matter. So were her wings and eyes. Zecora handed her a crown. "So, I'm supposed to be a princess? LAAAAAAME."

Scootaloo

24 Jun, 2012, 12:52 pm

BTW, genre is Grimdark/Sad/Comedy/Romance

Chibithepony

28 Jun, 2012, 2:35 pm

Holy moly creepy/awsome/(^.^)

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