Phyra´s story by Brisa!450

Wow she changed a lot. o.o

(Please don´t comment until I finish to upload the story! Thanks :D )

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
29 Sep, 2014, 3:40 pm
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Brisa!450

29 Sep, 2014, 3:52 pm

Year: 1401

"There was raining in Eradia´s castle,and Ana was cleaning the prince´s room.She was so tired.
When she finished,she went to the kitchen for take a little break.When,suddenly,she heared something:
???: Help!Help!
Ana: What...?
She looked throught (SP?) the window and she saw a little girl that was runnig away from a dog.
Ana took the girl inside the castle´s kitchen.
Ana: Are you ok?
Girl: Yes I am...thank you for save me! nwn (hug)
Ana hugged the girl with a smile in her face.
Ana: What´s your name?
Susana: My name is Susana! I was playing when a dog tried to b.ite me!
Ana: Don´t worry,now you are save! My name is Ana,I work here,cleaning the castle.
Susana: Cleaning? That´s so bored!
Susana used to visit Ana everyday.And one day,Ana went to buy some things for the kitchen when she heared something:
Story teller: Do you want to hear another story?
Children: Yes please!!
Story teller: Ok! (play the guitar) This is the story of a mask that make true your wishes!
(continue)

Brisa!450

29 Sep, 2014, 4:01 pm

Ana started to pay attention to the man.
Story teller: That mask was made by a evil magician! Everyone who weared it would pay a price.
Children: (looks sourprised)
Ana: That is another stupid story invented by you!
Story teller: No,no! I swear that is true! (plays the guitar) You can find it in the magic shop of this village.Come with me!

Ana followed the man to a very old shop.

Story teller: Hey Evi! This girl wants to see the Phanton Mask.

Suddenly,a very old woman appeared.

Evi: Oh...ok...here it is..!
(shows a very old,golden mask)
Do you want to buy it?
Ana: Umh...how much it costs...?
Evi: 150 golden coins.
Ana: WHAT?! That´s so expensive!
Evi: Umh...ok.We can use the magic because we are more than eighteen...so you can buy it for one hundred golden coins.
Ana: ...Ok.

Ana started to work more hard that usually,for get more money for buy the mask.

Ana: Susana,with that mask we will be rich!
Susana: But...the story teller said that...
(continue)

Brisa!450

29 Sep, 2014, 4:10 pm

Ana: Don´t worry Susana! (hugs Susana)
Susana: (looks worry)

1 year later,Ana come back to the shop.

Evi: Ok...where´s the money?
Ana: Here.
Evi: Ok...here you have the mask! Be carefull!

Ana can´t wait for use the mask,she put the mask on her face....

And...

Ana: ...N-No! (fells on the floor)
What is happening?!

Her body started to change its colors and her eyes turned black.
Now she was posse.sed by the mask.

Ana: I...have to destroy this kingdom!!!

A lot of golden mask started to destroy the magic shop.

Evi: Oh no...!
Story teller: Let´s go out of here!

The kingdom was a chaos.

The king and his soldiers couldn´t do nothing.

Suddenly...

Susana: Ana please stop!
Ana: (turned back)
Susana: Please...you are not a monster...you are my sister!
Ana: ...Susana?
Ana hugged Susana.
Ana: I...have to go...far away from here...I don´t want to hurt anyone...
Susana: (cryes)

Ana dissapeared with all the golden masks...

Nobody knew where she was...
Until she met our friends."

Brisa!450

29 Sep, 2014, 4:10 pm

But that is another story...

The end?

I hope you like it? ;D

Brisa!450

29 Sep, 2014, 4:10 pm

!*

Brisa!450

29 Sep, 2014, 4:16 pm

I read very surreal books sooo they inspired me! ;D

Yup. :)

Brisa!450

29 Sep, 2014, 4:20 pm

Yup! xD

Is very surreal,but surreal things are cool. :3

You feel imposible experiences. n.n

But meh,Laty´s world is veeery surreal. xD

Brisa!450

29 Sep, 2014, 4:24 pm

Yup. :) xD

Brisa!450

29 Sep, 2014, 4:28 pm

Yes let´s chat better. xD

Athena28

29 Sep, 2014, 4:41 pm

I love that story! now I want to tell it my not exsicting kid! XD I really love the design of this picture! its adorable!

Brisa!450

29 Sep, 2014, 4:44 pm

xDD

Thank you so much! ;D

KangarooDragon

29 Sep, 2014, 8:22 pm

awesome!! >u<

AmbyChu

29 Sep, 2014, 11:31 pm

150 gold coins?OVERPRICE.

Bowpmsas

01 Oct, 2014, 12:45 am

Wow! Another great story! Well done! 8 J

Darn. I feel sorry for Phyra though... : /

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