cave hunters part 2 by David knapp

Similar to the first. A little more detail. Tell me what you think.

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30 Jul, 2009, 12:46 am
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Munin

31 Jul, 2009, 11:29 pm

I like this more than the first. Are you going to keep pushing the idea? I hope so. I would suggest playing around with the composition some more and getting more contrast in there to add depth. A few gentle strokes with a large softbrush over the spikes of the cave mouth with that sky colour would add a lot, if not over done. Hope this helps. :)

David knapp

01 Aug, 2009, 3:59 am

Munin, thank you very much for your advice. Next time I do a landscape like this I will try to add more contrast. And take a little more time to capture depth looking back there is little value change and a poor one two three.next time I'll try to work on this. Again thanks for the help:)

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