I dont think that this looks stupid at all.
But you shouldnt ink it like that.
First you should erase it a bit away, so you cant see the lines that much strong anymore.
Then you shouldtry to get the whole person again, but with a less stronger brush and try to make it look more... "fluent" and less "edgy" (i dunno if its right to say it like that, but I cant find any other words @ the moment...)
And dont forget to draw the ears.
Ears are ugly and complicated i know but an easy C or such would be enough to at least show that there is sthn.

Oh and the (from me seen) right eye is a little bit too much on the left.

Hope this helped a bit. :P